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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar in this sentence: If engineers do not come up with new ideas, they cannot find best solution for the problems. ###RESPONSE:

If engineers do not come up with new ideas, they cannot find the best solution for the problems.

If engineers do not come up with new ideas, they cannot find a good solution for the problems.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammaticality: As a result, the engineering design would be in slow progress and there are still a lot of complex problems left unsolved. ###RESPONSE:

As a result, the engineering design would be in slow progress and there are still a lot of complex problems left unsolved.

As a result, the engineering design would be in a slow-progress and there are still a lot of complex problems left unresolved.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix the grammatical mistakes: Out of 10 dollars made, this factory only have 1 dollar, while the Japanese company gets 9. ###RESPONSE:

Out of 10 dollars made, this factory only has 1 dollar, while the Japanese company gets 9.

Out of 10 dollars, this factory has only 1 dollar; and the Japanese company gets 9.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix disfluencies in the sentence: The reason why this factory gets so little is that the design belongs to that Japanese company. ###RESPONSE:

The reason why this factory gets so little is that the design belongs to that Japanese company.

The reason why this factory has such a low number of workers is because the design belongs to that Japanese company.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: Therefore, very little money is devoted to design process for innovation and these companies only repeat this low-end production circle. ###RESPONSE:

Therefore, very little money is devoted to the design process for innovation and these companies only repeat this low-end production circle.

Therefore, very little money is spent on the design process of innovation and these companies only repeat this low-end production circle.

###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammaticality of this sentence: In addition to China's low-end industrial structure, the bad situation of intellectual property protection also hampers engineering innovational process. ###RESPONSE:

In addition to China's low-end industrial structure, the bad state of intellectual property protection also hinders the engineering innovation process.

In addition to China's low-end industrial structure, the bad situation of intellectual property protection also hampers the engineering innovation process.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar errors in this sentence: Therefore, innovation is discouraged by lack of protection for intellectual property in society. ###RESPONSE:

Therefore, innovation is discouraged by the lack of protection for intellectual property in society.

Therefore, innovation is discouraged by a lack of protection for intellectual property in society.

###INSTRUCTION: Make the sentence grammatical: To sum up, China's low-end industrial structure and bad situation of intellectual property protection are the two major problems that hamper engineering design process in China. ###RESPONSE:

To sum up, China's low-end industrial structure and bad situation of intellectual property protection are the two major problems that hamper the engineering design process in China.

To sum up, China has a low-end industrial structure with poor intellectual property protection and bad situation for the engineering design process in China.

###INSTRUCTION: Remove all grammatical errors from this text: Nowadays it is common to see a person carry a laptop everywhere, which was unimaginable thirty years ago. ###RESPONSE:

Nowadays, it is common to see a person carry a laptop everywhere, which was unimaginable thirty years ago.

Nowadays, people usually see a person carrying a laptop wherever they go.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar in the sentence: Till now, laptop is still a necessary tool in people's daily life. ###RESPONSE:

Until now, the laptop is still a necessary tool in people's daily lives.

Until now, laptops have been a necessary tool for people's daily lives.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix the grammatical mistakes: One of the reasons for its success was that laptop catered to people's needs greatly. ###RESPONSE:

One of the reasons for its success was that laptop catered to people's needs greatly.

One reason for its success is that it caters to people's needs so greatly.

###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammar of this text: From the examples in the context above, we can conclude that generally, the development of technology is determined by both technological factors as well as social factors. ###RESPONSE:

From the examples in the context above, we can conclude that generally, the development of technology is determined by both technological factors as well as social factors.

From the examples in the context above, we can conclude that generally, the development of technology is determined by both technological factors as well as social factors.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix the grammar mistakes: This is undoubtedly true because that inventions throughout history have greatly improved the quality of people's lives, and people's endless desires have stimulated development of new technologies. ###RESPONSE:

This is undoubtedly true because that inventions throughout history have greatly improved the quality of people's lives, and people's endless desires have stimulated the development of new technologies.

This is undeniably true because that inventions throughout history have greatly improved the quality of people's lives, and people's endless desires have stimulated development of new technologies.

###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammaticality of this text: In the 21st century, new desires, as well as new problems have emerged, such as environment pollution, bionics, exploration of outer-space and so on. ###RESPONSE:

In the 21st century, new desires, as well as new problems, have emerged, such as environment pollution, bionics, exploration of outer-space, and so on.

In the 21st century, new desires have emerged, as well as new problems have arisen, such as environmental pollution, bionics, exploration of outer space and so on.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar in this sentence: Among all of these needs, the most urgent and necessary technologies should be the ones that cope with the effect of global warming. ###RESPONSE:

Among all these needs, the most urgent and necessary technologies should be those that deal with the effects of global warming.

Among all these needs, the most urgent and necessary technologies should be those that cope with the effect of global warming.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar errors in this sentence: It is stated that a significant parf of carbon dioxide emission is due to burning of fossil fuels, such as gasoline and natural gases. ###RESPONSE:

It is stated that a significant amount of carbon dioxide emission is due to burning of fossil fuels, such as gasoline and natural gases.

It is stated that a significant percentage of the carbon dioxide emissions are due to burning of fossil fuels, such as gasoline and natural gas.

###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammaticality of this sentence: In conclusion, replacing traditional cars by solar cars can effectively control the deterioration of global warming, but further improvements are needed to widely popularize the use of solar cars. ###RESPONSE:

In conclusion, replacing traditional cars with solar cars can effectively control the deterioration of global warming, but further improvements are needed to widely popularize the use of solar cars.

In conclusion, replacing traditional cars with solar cars can effectively control the deterioration of global warming and yet further improvements are needed to widely popularize the use of solar cars.

###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammaticality of this sentence: However results have proven otherwise. ###RESPONSE:

However, results have proven otherwise.

However, results have shown again that the aging process is not a good thing to do.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix disfluencies in the sentence: Health issues caused by air pollution not only affect the individual but also to the world economy because those who are affected will not be able to work. ###RESPONSE:

Health issues caused by air pollution not only affect the individual but also to the world economy because those who are affected will not be able to work.

Health issues caused by air pollution not only affect the individual but also to the world economy, because those who are affected will not be able to work.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar: In order to solve the problem of air pollution, we got to improve on the current battery technology and come up with better control devices. ###RESPONSE:

In order to solve the problem of air pollution, we got to improve on the current battery technology and come up with better control devices.

In order to solve the problem of air pollution, we have to get to improve on the current battery technology and come up with better control devices.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar: For my home country, China, although its design process for innovation has been improved a lot, there still remain several factors which hamper the innovation process significantly. ###RESPONSE:

For my home country, China, although its design process for innovation has been improved a lot, there still remain several factors which hamper the innovation process significantly.

For my home country, China, although its design processes have been improved a lot, there still remains several factors that hinder the innovation process significantly.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix the grammar mistakes: Based on this idea, this essay will focus on two factors and explain their corresponding effects on certain design stages. ###RESPONSE:

Based on this idea, this essay will focus on two factors and explain their corresponding effects on certain design stages.

Based on this idea, this essay will focus on two factors that affect the design stage of a product.

###INSTRUCTION: Update to remove grammar errors: Firstly, the directors and manager of the state-owned enterprises exploit their position and power in the company to advance their own private interests. ###RESPONSE:

Firstly, the directors and managers of the state-owned enterprises exploit their position and power in the company to advance their own private interests.

Firstly, the directors and managers of the state-owned enterprises employ their position and power as a means to advance their own private interests.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar: Thus, the money which goes into operation is reduced largely. ###RESPONSE:

Thus, the money which goes into operation is reduced largely.

Thus, the money that goes to the operation is reduced largely.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammatical errors: As a consequence, most of the managers and employees have no sense of professional dedication and responsibility. ###RESPONSE:

As a consequence, most of the managers and employees have no sense of professional dedication and responsibility.

As a consequence, most of the managers and employees have no sense of professional dedication and responsibility.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar errors in this sentence: Even if employees encounter some precious ideas by chance, they may not want to put effort into doing research and converting the ideas into production. ###RESPONSE:

Even if employees encounter some precious ideas by chance, they may not want to put effort into doing research and converting the ideas into production.

Even though employees may encounter some precious ideas by chance, they may not want to put their efforts into doing research and converting them into producing.

###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammaticality of this sentence: They have to prepare for competition and the possibilities of bankrupt. ###RESPONSE:

They have to prepare for competition and the possibilities of bankrupt.

They have to prepare themselves for competition, and the possibility of bankruptcy is very high.

###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammaticality of this text: The poor equipment in private companies may lead to large uncertainty in design stage. ###RESPONSE:

The poor equipment in private companies may lead to a large uncertainty in the design stage.

The poor equipment in private companies may lead to a large uncertainty in the design stage

###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar: By contrast, vaccine discovery is a kind of technology based on a sequence of basic research, followed by applied research, leading to development. ###RESPONSE:

By contrast, vaccine discovery is a kind of technology based on a sequence of basic research, followed by applied research, leading to development.

By contrast, vaccine discovery is a kind of technology based on the sequencing of basic research and followed by applied research; it leads to development.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammaticality in this sentence: The low technological standard is one of the significant factors which hamper engineering design process. ###RESPONSE:

The low technological standard is one of the significant factors which hamper the engineering design process.

The low technology standards are one of the significant factors that hinder the engineering design process.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar in the sentence: For those who manage to enter design industry and start innovative work, their exposure to advanced technology is limited. ###RESPONSE:

For those who manage to enter the design industry and start innovative work, their exposure to advanced technology is limited.

For those who have entered the design industry and started working on innovative projects, their exposure to advanced technologies is limited.

###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammaticality: Another problem hampering engineering design process is that proprietary intellectual property is not highly valued in China. ###RESPONSE:

Another problem hampering the engineering design process is that proprietary intellectual property is not highly valued in China.

Another problem hampering the engineering design process is that proprietary intellectual property is not highly valued in China.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar errors: The government believes that this will improve the engineering design process for innovation in the near future. ###RESPONSE:

The government believes that this will improve the engineering design process for innovation in the near future.

The government believes that this will improve the engineering design process for innovation in the near future.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammaticality of the sentence: Other than this international regulation, environmental concern is also an important determining factor in shaping nuclear technological innovations. ###RESPONSE:

Other than this international regulation, environmental concern is also an important determining factor in shaping nuclear technological innovations.

Other than this international regulation, environmental concerns are also an important determining factor in shaping nuclear technologies.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar in this sentence: Besides, it also costs large amount of money to deal with spent fuel and radioactive waste. ###RESPONSE:

Besides, it also costs a large amount of money to deal with spent fuel and radioactive waste.

Besides the cost of the fuel and radioactive waste, it also costs a lot of money for dealing with spent fuel and radioactive waste.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar errors: In a sentence, when dealing with energy crisis, doing analysis and selecting the best solution is of great importance. ###RESPONSE:

In a sentence, when dealing with an energy crisis, doing analysis and selecting the best solution is of great importance.

In a sentence, when dealing with an energy crisis, it is important to do analysis and choosing the best solution is very much important

###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammaticality: Thereupon, only a carefully and wisely done engineering design can finally meet the needs of reducing energy consumption and being environmentally friendly at the same time. ###RESPONSE:

Thereupon, only a carefully and wisely done engineering design can finally meet the needs of reducing energy consumption and being environmentally friendly at the same time.

Thereupon, only a careful and wisely done engineering design will finally meet the needs of reducing energy consumption and be environmentally friendly at the same time

###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar in this sentence: Through decades of development, bar code has been shaped by social factors to some extent. ###RESPONSE:

Through decades of development, the bar code has been shaped by social factors to some extent.

Through decades of development, the bar code has been shaped by social factors to some extent.

###INSTRUCTION: Remove grammar mistakes: The users, especially retailers and product manufacturers, play important roles in improving bar code. ###RESPONSE:

The users, especially retailers and product manufacturers, play important roles in improving the bar code.

The users, particularly retailers and product manufacturers, play an important role in improving the bar code.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar errors: Firs and foremost, bar code emerged and developed as the times required. ###RESPONSE:

First, the bar code emerged and developed as the times required.

First, the bar code emerged and developed as the time required by the times required.

###INSTRUCTION: Grammar improvements: However, the first application area of bar code was not supermarket or grocery but railroads. ###RESPONSE:

However, the first application area of the bar code was not supermarket or grocery but railroads.

However, the first application area for the bar code was not a supermarket or grocery store; it was the railroad.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammaticality: On the other hand, retailers then were just in need of a system like bar code. ###RESPONSE:

On the other hand, retailers then were just in need of a system like a bar code.

On the other hand, retailers then were simply in need of a system called a bar code.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix all grammatical errors: Today the demands of users are still shaping bar code, expanding it to more application fields like libraries and post industry. ###RESPONSE:

Today, the demands of users are still shaping the bar code, expanding it to more application fields like libraries and post industry.

Today, the demands for users are still shaping the bar code, expanding it to more applications in the library and post-industry.

###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammaticality of this text: Another factor that affects bar code's development is the economic concerns. ###RESPONSE:

Another factor that affects the bar code's development is the economic concerns.

Another factor that affects the development of a bar code is its economic concerns.

###INSTRUCTION: Grammar improvements: Besides, users have to buy devices that read bar code as well. ###RESPONSE:

Besides, users have to buy devices that read bar code as well.

Besides, users have to buy devices that can read the bar code as well.

###INSTRUCTION: Remove all grammatical errors from this text: Due to this reason, bar code was not broadly implemented as soon as it was invented. ###RESPONSE:

Due to this reason, the bar code was not widely implemented as soon as it was invented.

Due to this reason, the bar code has not been widely implemented as soon as it was invented.

###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammaticality: In addition to the demands and economic concerns, the wide range of users helps to improve bar code. ###RESPONSE:

In addition to the demands and economic concerns, the wide range of users helps to improve the bar code.

In addition to the demands and economic concerns, the wide range of users helps to improve the bar code.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar: It promotes bar code to be developed into an internationally recognized and commonly readable system. ###RESPONSE:

It promotes the bar code to be developed into an internationally recognized and commonly read system.

It promotes the development of a bar code for being used as an international recognition system.

###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammar of this text: Besides globalization, the various kinds of users shape it to an easily implemented technology. ###RESPONSE:

Besides globalization, the various kinds of users shape it to an easily implemented technology.

Besides globalization, the various kinds of users shape it to an easy-to-implement technology.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammatical errors: To sum up, bar code is an important technology. ###RESPONSE:

To sum up, bar code is an important technology.

To sum up, the bar code is an important technology that has been used for many years in different countries.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar errors: The shortage of natural resources mean that all raw materials required for engineering design process for innovations would have to come from import. ###RESPONSE:

The shortage of natural resources means that all the raw materials required for the engineering design process for innovations would have to come from import.

The shortage of natural resources means that all the raw materials required for the engineering design process for innovation must be imported into the market.

###INSTRUCTION: Grammar improvements: This by itself poses problems such as greater cost incurred for innovations, shipment fees, as well as a delay in engineering design process. ###RESPONSE:

This by itself poses problems such as greater cost incurred for innovations, shipment fees, as well as a delay in the engineering design process.

This is a problem that arises from the fact that greater costs are incurred for innovations, shipping fees, as well as delayed engineering design processes.

###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammar of this text: Without funding, this step of designing would be impossible especially if the raw materials are required in large quantity. ###RESPONSE:

Without funding, this step of designing would be impossible, especially if the raw materials are required in large quantities.

Without funding, this step of designing would be impossible, especially if the raw materials are required in a large quantity.

###INSTRUCTION: Remove all grammatical errors from this text: Water supply has always been a key issue for consideration by Singapore government. ###RESPONSE:

The water supply has always been a key issue for consideration by the Singapore government.

The water supply has always been a major issue for the Singapore government.

###INSTRUCTION: Remove grammar mistakes: Hence when idea of water desalination first came out, it was greatly funded by Singapore government for further improvements in Singapore. ###RESPONSE:

Hence, when the idea of water desalination first came out, it was greatly funded by the Singapore government for further improvements in Singapore.

Hence, the idea of water desalination first came out on the ground, and it was heavily funded by the Singapore government for further improvements in Singapore.

###INSTRUCTION: Remove grammatical mistakes: Even though the project took an extra two months, it helped to increase market share of Toshiba. ###RESPONSE:

Even though the project took an extra two months, it helped to increase market share of Toshiba.

Even though the project took an extra two months, it helped to increase market share of Toshiba.

###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammar of this text: If there have been no changes in views of investors, Toshiba laptops would not have existed in the current market. ###RESPONSE:

If there have been no changes in the views of investors, Toshiba laptops would not have existed in the current market.

If there had been no changes to the views of investors, Toshiba laptops would not exist in the current market.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammaticality in this sentence: At that time, the offices were cramped and there were no space available for workers to place their desktop. ###RESPONSE:

At that time, the offices were cramped, and there was no space available for workers to place their desktop.

At that time, the offices were cramped; there was no space available for workers to place their desktop.

###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammaticality of this sentence: This convenience increases efficiency of workers as they are now able to work from anywhere in their offices besides their desk area. ###RESPONSE:

This convenience increases efficiency of workers as they are now able to work from anywhere in their offices besides their desk area.

This convenience has increased efficiency of workers as they can now work from anywhere in their offices without having to go back and forth between their desk areas.

###INSTRUCTION: Make the sentence fluent: But there still existed a lot of discoveries that were made as a result of serendipitous result of normal research which always had some interesting stories behind them. ###RESPONSE:

But there still existed a lot of discoveries that were made as a result of serendipitous results of normal research which always had some interesting stories behind them.

But there still existed a lot of discoveries that were made as a result of the normal research which always had some interesting stories behind them.

###INSTRUCTION: Remove grammatical mistakes: Although these two types of discoveries could both influence the society, there are two interesting differences between them in designing process. ###RESPONSE:

Although these two types of discoveries could both influence society, there are two interesting differences between them in the design process.

Although these two types of discoveries could both have influenced society, there are two interesting differences between them in their design processes.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix errors in this text: In contrast, there is always no specific need for the serendipitous discovery and the research which makes the discovery is usually for other purpose, and the serendipitous discovery is usually due to unexpected result of a normal research. ###RESPONSE:

In contrast, there is always no specific need for the serendipitous discovery and the research which makes the discovery is usually for other purposes, and the serendipitous discovery is usually due to unexpected results of a normal research.

In contrast, there is always no specific need for serendipity discovery and the research that makes the discovery is usually for another purpose; and the serendipitous discovery is usually due to unexpected results from normal research.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammatical errors: But fortunately, we got very smart and careful people who were able to find them and find a way to use them. ###RESPONSE:

But fortunately, we got very smart and careful people who were able to find them and find a way to use them.

But fortunately, we got very smart and careful people who are able to find these things and then they can be used in the way that we want.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammaticality of the sentence: Although there are differences between the two types of discoveries, there is also some similarities between them. ###RESPONSE:

Although there are differences between the two types of discoveries, there are also some similarities between them.

Although there are differences in the two types of discoveries, there are also some similarities between them.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammaticality in this sentence: A majority of these limitations would increases the cost of the innovation and hence require careful design. ###RESPONSE:

A majority of these limitations would increase the cost of the innovation and hence require careful design.

A majority of these limitations would increase the costs of the innovation, and hence requires careful design.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix all grammatical errors: One of these problems includes the city-state's lack of land space which would affect the structural design of the innovation particularly if it was on the large scale. ###RESPONSE:

One of these problems includes the city-state's lack of land space which would affect the structural design of the innovation, particularly if it was on the large scale.

One of these problems is the city-state's lack of land space, which would affect the structural design of the innovation, especially if it were on a large scale.

###INSTRUCTION: Remove grammatical mistakes: This increase in cost will hence hinder the market value and affect the economic analysis stage of the design process. ###RESPONSE:

This increase in cost will hence hinder the market value and affect the economic analysis stage of the design process.

This increase in the cost will thus, hinder the market value and affect the economic analysis stage of the design process.

###INSTRUCTION: Make the sentence grammatical: In view of the collapse of Nicoll highway back in April 2004, HDB has put up very strict requirements on the piling process and the materials used, like grade 30 concrete should be used in piling. ###RESPONSE:

In view of the collapse of the Nicoll highway back in April 2004, HDB has put up very strict requirements for the piling process and the materials used, like grade 30 concrete, should be used in piling.

In view of the collapse of the Nicoll highway back in April 2004, HDB has put up very strict requirements on the piling process and the materials used, like grade 30 concrete should be used in piling.

###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammaticality of this sentence: Contradictory to its limited land area as discussed earlier, it houses more than 4 million people. ###RESPONSE:

Contradictory to its limited land area as discussed earlier, it houses more than 4 million people.

Contradictory to its limited land area as discussed earlier, it houses more than 4 million people.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar errors: All these will seriously affect the functionality analysis stage of the design process, as more time and consideration will have to be channeled into this portion. ###RESPONSE:

All these will seriously affect the functionality analysis stage of the design process, as more time and consideration will have to be channeled into this portion.

All these will seriously affect the functional analysis stage of the design process, as more time and consideration has to be channeled into this part.

###INSTRUCTION: Remove all grammatical errors from this text: Such an example shows how proper planning of the amenities lead to the success of the application. ###RESPONSE:

Such an example shows how proper planning of the amenities leads to the success of the application.

Such a example shows how proper planning of the amenities leads to the successful application of the application.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammatical mistakes in this sentence: The story about how Schoenbein invented guncotton was quite an interesting story. ###RESPONSE:

The story about how Schoenbein invented gun cotton is quite an interesting story.

The story about how Schoenbein invented guncotton was quite an interesting story.

###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammar of this text: After he finished cleaning he thought that his wife will blame him after she saw what he had done. ###RESPONSE:

After he finished cleaning, he thought that his wife would blame him after she saw what he had done.

After he finished cleaning, he thought that his wife would blame him for what he did.

###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammar of this text: When he walked near the stove the apron burned without any smoke and ashes left. ###RESPONSE:

When he walked near the stove, the apron burned without any smoke and ash left behind.

When he walked near the stove, the apron burned without any smoke and ashes left.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammatical errors: But without the prudential attitude towards science he may miss his good luck and did not go on finding how can this phenomenon occur. ###RESPONSE:

But without the prudential attitude towards science, he may miss his good luck and did not go on finding how can this phenomenon occur.

But with a prudential attitude toward science, he may miss his good fortune and did not go on finding what caused this phenomenon to occur.

###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammaticality of this text: As both of them are explosive, people use them to exploit mines, tear down great buildings and provide a high temperature for many chemical experiments. ###RESPONSE:

As both of them are explosive, people use them to exploit mines, tear down great buildings, and provide a high temperature for many chemical experiments.

As both of them are explosive, people use them to exploit mines, tear down huge buildings, and provide a high temperature in many chemical experiments.

###INSTRUCTION: Make the sentence fluent: As it was unveiled in the research report, it somehow took longer for the health facilities to obtain approval from the State Health Agency than to actually build or extend the needed facilities. ###RESPONSE:

As it was unveiled in the research report, it somehow took longer for the health facilities to obtain approval from the State Health Agency than to actually build or extend the needed facilities.

As it was revealed in the research report, it somehow took longer for the health facilities to obtain approval from the State Health Agency than to actually build or extend the needed facilities.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammaticality: In current stage, political environment and people's mindset are two of the problems that may hamper engineering design process for innovation. ###RESPONSE:

In the current stage, the political environment and people's mindset are two of the problems that may hamper the engineering design process for innovation.

In the current stage, political environment and people's mindets are two of the problems that may hinder the engineering design process for innovation.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammaticality: Both can be classified as a kind of special glue, the history of post-it notes and super glue seems rather different. ###RESPONSE:

Both can be classified as a kind of special glue, the history of post-it notes and super glue seems rather different.

Both can be classified as a kind of special glue; the history of post-it notes and super glue seem quite different.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammatical mistakes in this sentence: The next stage research is to use the scientific method to fulfill the previous target. ###RESPONSE:

The next stage of research is to use the scientific method to fulfill the previous target.

The next stage in research is to use the scientific method to fulfill the previous target.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar in the sentence: In this stage, the difference between the two kinds of discoveries turns to be that the serendipitous discovery's inventor could not meet his initial needs like the normal inventor but accidently create a totally different product instead. ###RESPONSE:

In this stage, the difference between the two kinds of discoveries turns to be that the serendipitous discovery's inventor could not meet his initial needs like the normal inventor but accidently created a totally different product instead.

In this stage, the difference between the two kinds of discoveries becomes that the serendipitous discovery's inventor could not meet his initial needs like the normal inventor but accidently created a completely different product than it would have been without the serendipitous discovery.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammatical mistakes in this sentence: One is low adhesive but re-adherable so is used to make notes that can be attached to documents and other surfaces freely. ###RESPONSE:

One is low adhesive, but re-adherable, so it is used to make notes that can be attached to documents and other surfaces freely.

One is a low adhesive, but re-adhesive so it can be used to make notes that can be attached to documents and other surfaces free.

###INSTRUCTION: Grammar improvements: The other one is high adhesive and functions quickly so can be used to glue many materials quickly with great strength. ###RESPONSE:

The other one is high adhesive, and functions quickly, so it can be used to glue many materials quickly with great strength.

The other one is a high-adhesive, and it works quickly so that you can easily use it to glue many materials together in a very strong manner.

###INSTRUCTION: Remove grammatical mistakes: So it is no more surprising that the two products both become very popular among the consumers as soon as they come out. ###RESPONSE:

So it is no more surprising that the two products both become very popular among the consumers as soon as they come out.

So, it is no longer surprising that the two products both become very popular among the consumers as soon as they come out.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix all grammatical errors: Technical factor is one of the four elements that determine the development of electric vehicle. ###RESPONSE:

Technical factors are one of the four elements that determine the development of an electric vehicle.

Technical factors are one of the four elements that determine the development of electric vehicles.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar errors in this sentence: Compared to the structure of a conventional automobile, electric vehicle has a similar structure but different components. ###RESPONSE:

Compared to the structure of a conventional automobile, an electric vehicle has a similar structure, but different components.

Compared to the structure of a conventional automobile, an electric vehicle has a similar structure, but with different components.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammatical errors: In addition, electric vehicle is safe to drive around as it is solely using electricity, while most conventional vehicles require gasoline, which is inflammable. ###RESPONSE:

In addition, electric vehicle is safe to drive around as it is solely using electricity, while most conventional vehicles require gasoline, which is inflammable.

In addition, electric vehicles are safe to drive around as they do not use any fuel other than the electricity that powers them; and, in contrast, most conventional vehicles require gasoline, which is inflammable.

###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammaticality of this text: On the other hand, electric vehicle utilizes electrical energy by using batteries, so the engine is relatively clean, emission-free and quiet. ###RESPONSE:

On the other hand, electric vehicle utilizes electrical energy by using batteries, so the engine is relatively clean, emission-free, and quiet.

On the other hand, an electric car uses electricity from batteries to operate its engine, so the engine is generally clean, emission-free, and quiet.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar in this sentence: In the end, gasoline vehicles controlled the monopoly on automobiles in market. ###RESPONSE:

In the end, gasoline vehicles controlled the monopoly on automobiles in the market.

In the end, gasoline vehicles controlled the monopoly of automobile in the market.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix all grammatical errors: They also feel that these cars are less attractive compared to conventional cars too. ###RESPONSE:

They also feel that these cars are less attractive compared to conventional cars too.

They also feel that these cars are more attractive than conventional cars, too.

###INSTRUCTION: Update to remove grammar errors: Nowadays, with the ever-accelerated technology, many inventions come into being, and many new words come with them as well. ###RESPONSE:

Nowadays, with the ever-accelerating technology, many inventions come into being, and many new words come with them as well.

Nowadays, with the ever-accelerating technology, many inventions come into being, and many new words have been created out of them as well.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar errors: It is a typical serendipity example, which in fact shares some common points with a conventional research. ###RESPONSE:

It is a typical serendipity example, which in fact shares some common points with a conventional research.

It is a typical serendipity example that in fact shares some common characteristics with a conventional research.

###INSTRUCTION: Make the sentence grammatical: Although there are similarities existing, they differ from each other in several respects. ###RESPONSE:

Although there are similarities existing, they differ from each other in several respects.

Although there are similarities between them, they differ from each other in some respects.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix all grammatical errors: However, both of them are needed to make scientific world a more magic and wonderful world! ###RESPONSE:

However, both of them are needed to make the scientific world a more magical and wonderful world!

However, both of them are needed to make the scientific world a more magical and wonderful world!

###INSTRUCTION: Grammar improvements: In my humble opinion, its success is owing to both social and economic factors. ###RESPONSE:

In my humble opinion, its success is due to both social and economic factors.

In my humble opinion, its success is due to both social and economic factors.

###INSTRUCTION: Make the sentence grammatical: Military priority during the World War II was an important factor in propelling the design and use of jet engine. ###RESPONSE:

The military priority during World War II was an important factor in driving the design and usage of jet engines.

The military priority during World War II was an important factor in the design and use of jet engines.

###INSTRUCTION: Grammar improvements: As we can see, if there is no threat of war, the British Government may not provide any funding at all. ###RESPONSE:

As we can see, if there is no threat of war, the British Government may not provide any funding at all.

As we can see, if there is no threat of war, the British Government may not provide any funding for it.

###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammaticality of this sentence: The social setting of the invention also plays an interesting role in shaping the history of jet engine. ###RESPONSE:

The social setting of the invention also plays an interesting role in shaping the history of the jet engine.

The social setting of the invention, too, plays a significant role in shaping the history of the jet engines.

###INSTRUCTION: Make the sentence grammatical: Since the reform and open policy was established in 1978, China has enjoyed a booming development in economics and technology. ###RESPONSE:

Since the reform and open policy was established in 1978, China has enjoyed a booming development in economics and technology.

Since the reform and open policy was established in 1978, China has experienced a boom in economic and technological growth

###INSTRUCTION: Grammar improvements: As a result, a lot of factories are built to provide the whole world with cheap and qualified products. ###RESPONSE:

As a result, a lot of factories have been built to provide the whole world with cheap and qualified products.

As a result, a lot of factories have been built to provide all parts of the world with cheap and qualified products.