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Acrylic paint set: comes with 16 acrylic paints, 1 decorative storage tin, and 3 paint mixing trays. Pearlescent paints: each 12ml acrylic paint Tube features pearlescent, multi-dimensional pigments in vibrant colors with a shimmery gloss finish. Full coverage: whether you're looking for acrylic paint for beginners or simply an acrylic painting gift set, These pearlescent paints offer superior coverage and blending. Painting projects: Great for practicing acrylic painting techniques with classic black and white pearlescent paints, or making your mark with vibrant color shades! Varied surfaces: These satin paints work on a variety of surfaces such as foam core, canvas, wood, plastic, and construction paper, with the best definition on dark surfaces. Safe & nontoxic: paint set for adults and teens, age 14 & up.
This set of acrylic paints comes with 16 acrylic paints, 1 decorative storage tin, and 3 paint mixing trays. The paints are pearlescent, which means they will reflect white light with an intensity depending the angle you view the paint from. This will great flare to your painting. They also have multi-dimensional pigments in vibrant colors and shimmery gloss finish, which adds great beauty to your painting project. In addition, the paints offer superior coverage and blending, so you will have no smears. This is the perfect paint set to start practicing acrylic painting techniques with classic black and white pearlescent paints, or making your mark with vibrant color shades! The paints work on a variety of surfaces such as foam core, canvas, wood, plastic, and construction paper. You have so many surfaces to practice on! However, you need to remember that this paint has the best definition on dark surfaces. Most importantly, the paints are safe and nontoxic. This set ranges from 14 & up, and will make any adult or child happy!
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Fortunately, politicians of all stripes have begun to question why current tax and regulatory policies seem to be encouraging such behavior. As a general principle, companies that are not contributing to productivity growth or helping to solve broader social challenges shouldn’t be enjoying a free lunch. The British construction company Persimmon, for example, has been posting higher earnings not because of investments it made, but because the UK government introduced a special loan scheme for first-time homebuyers. And most of the major pharmaceutical firms now seem to show an interest in research and development only when they are buying a new drug and need to conduct clinical trials to secure exclusive rights to it.
Luckily, politicians from across the spectrum are beginning to question why our current regulatory and tax policies seem to encourage this kind of corporate selfishness. Generally, companies which are not contributing to the growth of productivity or helping to resolve broader social issues shouldn’t be allowed to skate past these responsibilities, only to reap the collective benefits later on. The British construction firm, Persimmon, for example, has been posting higher earnings recently, not because of any investments or innovations of its own, but because the UK government introduced a new kind of loan for first-time homebuyers. Similarly, most major pharmaceutical companies only seem interested in contributing to research and development when they are buying a new drug and seeking to secure a monopoly on its manufacture and sale. Corporations with access to such massive amounts of resources and privileges should be compelled to contribute to the collective gain of the societies they profit from.
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You may wonder how DNA could possibly relate to agricultural yields, but the link is actually quite an interesting one that is a curious mix of nature and technology. Agricultural yields can be increased through the use of genetic modification (GM), which relies on taking coveted properties from one organism and inserting these genes into another organism to create those same desired effects. The idea behind increasing agricultural yields is to provide more crops at reduced costs. While genetically modified crops have generally been created to feed people in developed nations, research has suggested that their use in developing countries has been far more beneficial.
Are you curious about how something like DNA could positively affect agricultural yields? It is an amazing topic, and the connection is actually an interesting mix of the natural world and advanced technology. By using genetic modification (GM), which is based on taking coveted properties from one organism and inserting these genes into another, agricultural yields could be increased manifold. Additionally, such crops could be made more resistant to pests, diseases, and environmental stressors. The ultimate goal behind using GM is to increase agricultural yields and provide more crops at lower prices. Although genetically modified crops have normally been created for developed nations, a recent study suggests that their usefulness in developing countries could be far more valuable. Since GM has the potential to boost yields and deliver more reliable food sources, such crops have the power to transform agriculture and help feed an expanding global population. So, it is evident that a balanced mix of nature and technology could do wonders.
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In either case, the authenticating body reads the transaction certificate sent by the application and verifies that the computing device 120 has been registered for use by the user 110. The authenticating body verifies the computing device 120 by comparing the device credential in the transaction certificate with its database of registered devices. The authenticating body preferably also compares the device credential with the device black-list kept by the authenticating body to identify computing devices that have been previously identified as attempting unauthorized transactions. The use of the device black-list allows the authenticating body to prevent fraud by unscrupulous individuals. While it is a relatively simple matter to generate false personal information, it is difficult to replicate unique device specific information.
Either way, the authenticating system reads the certificate sent by the application and checks to make sure that the device has been registered by the user, and compares the credentials in the certificate to its database of registered devices. Ideally, the authenticating system also compares the device credentials to a database of black-listed devices (devices which have been previously caught attempting unauthorized transactions). Black-lists are an important tool for authenticating systems to prevent fraud, because while it’s relatively easy to generate fake personal info, it’s pretty hard to replicate unique device specifications.
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The piano pedagogy degree is designed for students who desire to teach private or group piano in an independent studio. The degree combines music core instruction with piano pedagogy and performance courses, preparing prospective piano teachers for careers in the teaching field. A unique aspect of this degree is the opportunity to receive hands-on teaching training in the USU Youth Conservatory, a preparatory lab program that provides private and group instruction to over 200 pre-college pianists each week. USU became an All-Steinway school in 2012, offering students the ability to perform on the highest-quality pianos in the practice rooms and performance venues.
The piano pedagogy degree is a program that is meant for students who are looking to instruct private or group lessons in a privately owned studio. The program gives you a degree that shows you combined music core instruction with piano pedagogy as well as performance courses. It prepares hopeful piano teachers for the ability to have a vocation in the instructing field. A rare quality of this degree is that it gives you the ability to obtain practical instructor training within the USU Youth Conservatory, a preparatory laboratory program that gives one on one as well as group teachings to more than two hundred high school, college bound pianists every week. USU turned into an All-Steinway institute in 2012, giving the learners the privilege to utilize and present their skills on the highest-quality pianos in the performance venues, and even the practice rooms. Courses included are as follows: - Music Education 101 - Music Education 102 - Music Education 103 - Music Education 104 - Music Education 105 - Music Education 106 - Music Education 107 - Music Education 108 - Piano Pedagogy 101 - Piano Pedagogy 102 - Piano Pedagogy 103 - Piano Pedagogy 104 - Piano Pedagogy 105 - Piano Pedagogy 106 - Piano Pedagogy 107 - Piano Pedagogy 108 - Piano Pedagogy 109 - Piano Pedagogy 110 - Piano Performance 101 - Piano Performance 102 - Piano Performance 103 - Piano Performance 104 - Piano Performance 105 - Piano Performance 106 - Piano Performance 107 - Piano Performance 108 - Piano Performance 109 - Piano Performance 110 - Piano Performance 111 - Piano Performance 112 - Piano Performance 113 - Piano Performance 114 - Piano Performance 115 - Piano Performance 116 - Piano Performance 117 - Piano Performance 118 - Piano Performance 119 - Piano Performance 120 - Piano Performance 121 - Piano Performance 122
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Whether youre looking for a recipe for a rich and decadent dessert, savory seasoning or warm, satisfying soup, youll find a variety of recipes for almost any occasion in this latest collection. This is a great book, and you get so much for such a small investment! This particular edition is in a Paperback format. I was expecting just the standard cookie mixes, but was pleasantly surprised to also find mixes for almost everything from popcorn to chili spices, to muffins and breads. Recipes in Jars Here are jar recipes with everything from soup to snacks, cookies and breads, dips and drinks. These handsome, professionally designed templates can be used to add a personal touch and create a one of a kind gift that will be the highlight of any occasion. The most innovative way to give gifts from your kitchen.
Whether you're attempting to find a recipe for a sweet and savory dessert, tasty seasoning or cozy, pleasing soup, you'll discover a lot of recipes for pretty much any event in this newest set. This is a fantastic book, and you get years worth of recipes for such a little rate! This specific edition comes Paperback. I was simply anticipating simple cookie mixes, but was amazingly astonished to also discover mixes for pretty much any type of food I could think of, from popcorn to chili spices, to baked goods such as muffins and breads. There are also jared recipes with everything that can be contained within a jar, from soup to snacks, to cookies and breads, and even dips and drinks. These attractive, expertly crafted formats can have personal touches added to them in order to make an authentic, personalized present that will be the star of any event. You could create appetizers that will surprise the snootiest of guests, and stay consistent throughout the entire dinner, all the way to desert through this book. This is the most innovative method in which to provide gifts from your kitchen. You will not be disappointed in the slightest, as the contents of this handy piece of text will be satisfying to any consumer and homecook out there.
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Still, apart from small hints, we can’t tell that this Adelaide isn’t the so-called “real” or original one and that sends a crucial message -- the differences between these two groups of people are circumstantial, purely the result of having versus not having. In our world, too, we may allow ourselves to tolerate injustice against Others who feel removed from us. On some level maybe we tell ourselves that those Others aren’t really like us, so that we can look the other way and go on with our day. But Us is not allowing us to look away. It’s saying to viewers with a comfortable middle-class life, “We are all the same.” So if you’d ended up on the wrong side of that dividing line, you’d be the Other, and the Other would be you.
The differences between these two groups of people are inconclusive, purely the result of having versus not having. In our world, we tend to tolerate injustice against others who are different from us. At some level we believe that those others are different from us, so we can ignore them and go on with our lives. But the film, Us is not allowing us to overlook things. It’s saying to spectators with a comfy middle-class life, "We're all the same." And if you happened to end up on the wrong side of that dividing line, you'd be the other, and the other would be you.
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things calmed down and were going just fine — until once again, they weren’t. the situation played out almost exactly as before — i heard the beats slow down, freaked out, and found my room full of people within seconds [again, they were already on their way]. oxygen/fluids/repositioning happened, and this time it took a little longer for her to recover, but she eventually did. the midwife ordered more fluids and for a shot of terbutaline. if that didn’t work, we would plan for the more invasive measures [amnio infusion/fetal scalp monitoring]. i was terrified and absolutely shaking [physical reaction to it all?] but game for ANYTHING that would keep our baby safe! by this point my cervix was at 8-9 cm, so we were getting closer to the finish line.
Things seemed to calm down and were going on well until once again, they changed. The circumstances were almost identical to the previous one: I listened to the beats slowing down. I was worried and distraught. I found my room was full of people within moments since they were already on their way. They began to administer oxygen, fluids, repositioning, etc. And this time it took a little longer for her to recover, but she ultimately did. More fluids and a terbutaline shot were requested by the midwife. If that did not work, we thought of going for more invasive measures like amnio infusion or fetal scalp monitoring, etc. I was scared and actually trembling. Maybe it was a strong physical reaction to it all. But I was okay with anything that would save our baby! And at this point my cervix was around 8-9 cm, so that meant we were reaching the finish line.
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We apply our formulated approach in Chapter 3 to a set of collinear spin problems whereby the two magnetic layers in our general multilayer junction (consisting of two ferromagnets separated by a non-magnetic spacer layer) have their rotated magnetizations either ferromagnetically or anti-ferromagnetically aligned (parallel/anti-parallel to the net magnetization). Our analytical results provide the necessary conditions for optimising tunneling magnetoresistance (TMR) and show how a `switching' effect can be used to control it. We achieve this by calculating analytically in the ferromagnetic configuration the necessary conditions to support a 100% transmission success rate in one spin channel whilst making it very difficult for transmission to occur in the other spin channel. However, we show conclusively that re-aligning the magnetization to the anti-ferromagnetic configuration under the same conditions will make it very difficult for transmission to occur in either spin channel.
We may be able to optimize tunneling magnetoresistance (TMR) by rotating a pair of ferromagnets around a non-magnetic space layer. By switching the orientation of the magnetic fields (parallel or perpendicular to the main field), we should be able to exert control over the TMR. We can run calculations to determine what the optimal patterns and timing of these magnetic switches will be in order to encourage transmission through one specific spin channel. We have also found, however, that re-aligning the magnetic fields under the same conditions will discourage transmission through any channels.
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An economic policy expert has warned that plans to enact the NEEEF Bill in its current format could have adverse effects on the country’s economy and subsequently place the economy on a lower growth trajectory. Former Namfisa CEO, Rainer Ritter – writing in his private capacity, said in a submission made to the Law Reform and Development Commission regarding the New Equitable Economic Empowerment Framework (NEEEF) policy that from a timing perspective, it [NEEEF] is not opportune for the Namibian economy in the next three years. “The introduction of NEEEF in its present form will achieve the opposite; it will put the Namibian economy on a lower growth trajectory, similar to the economic period 1978-89 before independence. It is recommended that the NEEEF policy is put on ice until Cabinet has more clarity on the pros and cons of the current NEEEF Bill,” Ritter said. Ritters’ remarks come as Government considers possible reforms to the black empowerment policy by introducing the contentious NEEEF policy.
The piece of text is regarding a certain law expert’s cautionary statement regarding the NEEEF Bill. The expert states that the Bill could cause antagonizing effects on the country’s financials and in turn make the economy’s rate of growth lower than before. The expert is also stating that the NEEEF policy is not ideal for Namibian’s economy within the following three years. In fact, they provide the recommendation that the NEEEF policy be halted until the Cabinet obtains more understanding on the good and and bad of the current NEEEF Bill. In conclusion, the situation is very much still progressing, with no definitive answer as of yet.
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Andrea is the Alberta and Northwest Territories PTA Representative with the NPAA. She is also working in the role of the Education Officer. She is a combined Therapy Assistant (OTA/PTA) and has worked for Alberta Health Services for over 13 years. Within Alverta health Services, Andrea is the co-lead of the Therapy Assistant Council and has recently been invited to be a part of one of the post-secondary institution advisory councils. She is very passionate about the role of Therapy Assistants and how those in the profession can continue to develop and expand in all aspects of the career. Andrea joined the NPAA to try and be more involved on a national level, expand her networking outside of Alberta and joing a great association that advocates for those in the profession of physiotherapy. Andrea looks forward to working with all of you and providing you with more great education opportunities as they come up. Please don't be shy and send Andrea an e-mail if you would like to connect.
Andrea is the PTA Representative with the NPAA for Alberta and Northwest Territories. She is also an Education Officer, a combined Therapy Assistant (OTA/PTA) and has provided her services within the Alberta Health Services for more than 13 years. She is co-leading the Therapy Assistant Council and recently has received an invite to be on one of the post-secondary institution counseling boards. She cares an extreme amount about the position of Therapy Assistant and the ways in which the individuals within the profession can keep developing and expanding every aspect of the career. Andrea has become an NPAA member to make attempts in trying to be more involved on a country-wide scale, growing her business connections outside of Alberta as well as joining an amazing organization that helps those within physiotherapy. Andrea anticipates working with every single one of you and giving you more awesome education options when they come up. Please do not be afraid to send Andrea an email if you want to connect with her.
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Success! I'm running a dual-core Extreme with VMware 6 Workstation. The instructions helped immensely. I experienced an issue with my first attempt, where the mouse didn't want to play -- it would move but click wouldn't capture. I just reset the VM and tried again and it's installing now. I'm pretty excited about this, since previously I was using the JaS install and directely writing to an external drive; it was just a lot of work unplugging my original drive (as so not screw anything up), installing to a SATA drive (which has proven much more difficult that previously installing to an IDE drive; my old Smithfield machine had more than one IDE drive connector on the motherboard), then plugging the newly installed SATA drive into my PC via USB ... it all didn't really work great. I'll do what I can to tell you all how the rest of the install goes. Good luck!
I am successfully running a dual-core Extreme with VMware Workstation 6. The instructions were extremely helpful. During my first attempt, I encountered a problem where the mouse did not function well. The click function would not capture mouse movement. However, I simply reset the VM and attempted again, and it is functioning now. I am delighted with this outcome, since earlier I was using the JaS install and directly writing to an external drive. It was a cumbersome task unplugging my original drive, installing to a SATA drive (which is considerably more challenging than previously installing to an IDE drive; my old Smithfield machine had multiple IDE drive connectors on the motherboard), then plugging the recently installed SATA drive into my PC via USB. Regrettably, the results were suboptimal. I will do my best to keep you updated on how the rest of the installation goes. Please accept my best wishes.
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Lithuania and primarily its capital Vilnius already became a new hub for European financial service centres. Favourable regulatory and tax environment, excellent infrastructure, fastest internet, cheap office space and quality pool of relatively cheap employees makes Vilnius attractive for large international banking and finance institutions. UK giant Barclays Bank has been operating Barclays Technologies Centre Lithuania in Vilnius since 2009 servicing Barclay’s businesses across the world. Scandinavian rivals SEB, Swedbank, Danske Bank as well as finance industry leader Western Union, world’s biggest stock exchange operator NASDAQ have service centres in Vilnius too. NASDAQ also operates Vilnius Stock Exchange and Securities Depository in Lithuania and other Baltic states.
Vilnius, Lithuania, has become a business hotspot for European bankers. Favourable taxes and regulations, superior infrastructure, speedy internet, and a plethora of cheap workers and office spaces have attracted many large banking and finance firms to Vilnius. UK giant Barclays Bank began operating Barclays Technologies Centre Lithuania there in 2009, offering worldwide services. Scandinavian firms SEB, Swedbank, and Danske Bank, as well as industry titan Western Union, all have centers in Vilnius too. The NASDAQ even operates the Vilnius Stock Exchange and Securities Depository in Lithuania and other Baltic states.
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The Lenovo K7 Note or Lenovo K7 plus is an Upcoming smartphone in 2018 will be launched date on 21 March in 2018. You may look for the Lenovo K7 plus price, Lenovo K7 price 2018, Release date, Lenovo K7 price, Specs, Specification, Features and anything more? No tension! Here we are to inform to details about all of you require information of the smartphone 2018. Lenovo K7 note already announced about this Android v7.1.1 (Nougat) Operating system. They have 2.5 GHz Octa-core processor with supports are Graphics processing unit Mail-T880. It has Mediatek Helio P20 Chipset. Here, we are providing all necessary information about this Lenovo fast Upcoming Smartphone and Lenovo K7 +. If you have any question or problem about this, just read this full article step by step.
The Lenovo K7 Note, aka Lenovo K7, is the newest smartphone in 2018. It launched today, on 21 March. You'll easily be able to find all the information you need from Lenovo prices, specs, specifications, and features, don't worry! We are here to inform you about this new smartphone's details. Lenovo K7 has an Android v7.1.1 (Nougat) Operating system. It has a 2.5 GHz Octa-core processor with support for the Graphics processing unit Mail-T880 and Mediatek Helio P20 Chipset. We will provide you with all the necessary information about this Lenovo smartphone, but if you have any additional questions, you can read this step-by-step article.
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The Institute gives its clients careful and detailed counsel in their preparations for climbing objectives and when appropriate, has them first achieve intermediate goals to fully prepare. Climbs on Denali obviously involve many factors that we cannot control, among them temperature, wind, snowfall, and changeable climbing conditions. The key to success therefore is doing an excellent job working on those areas that a climber can do something about: skill in dealing with cold conditions, skill in climbing at an appropriate technical level, and personal conditioning. To have well-developed abilities in these areas and then to combine them with a carefully designed and guided itinerary is the most direct line to safety and success.
The institute provides clients with detailed guidance and recommends achieving intermediate goals as preparation. Climbing Denali involves varying weather conditions, which are not under one's control. The key to success, therefore, is to excel in areas within a climber's control, such as dealing with cold conditions, climbing skills, and personal conditioning. Combining well-developed abilities with a guided itinerary is the perfect path for safety and victory.
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Pianisme is a collection of unreleased and out-of-print piano works composed and recorded since 2004. Most of them are part of soundtracks for feature films by french director Sébastien Betbeder (from 2007’s Nuage and the very rare short film Nu devant un fantôme – whose music was completely unpublished until now). Also released for the first time: In the twilight of Paris (written the day after Luc Ferrari’s death, as a quiet homage to a composer whose works have often been part of the Sub Rosa catalogue) and Soñando, straight repetition and variations on a minimal pattern, created for choreographer Christian Rizzo’s 2010 show L’Oubli, toucher du bois.
Pianisme is a fantastic collection of unreleased and out-of-print piano compositions written and recorded since 2004. Many of the included works are from the soundtracks of some of French director Sébastien Betbeder’s feature films, such as Nuage (2007) and the ultra-rare short film Nu devant un fantôme. The music from that latter work’s soundtrack remained completely unpublished until now in Pianisme. Another magnificent piece that went unpublished until now is, “In the twilight of Paris”, which was composed as an homage to the brilliant composer Luc Ferrari (whose works often appeared in the Sub Rosa catalogue), only one day after that great man’s death. Another illustrious yet previously unpublished piece included in Pianisme is “Soñando”, a straight repetition and variations on a minimal pattern, which was created for choreographer Christian Rizzo’s 2010 show L’Oubli, toucher du bois.
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The OpenFlow support delivered with the NetIron 5.4 software release enables programmatic control for network operators including advanced traffic engineering across metro and wide-area networks and enhanced flood management and security enforcement inside data centers. This software, which will exist generally available in 3Q 2012, supports Brocade MLX Series, CER series and CES series routers and switches. Brocade’s hardware support for OpenFlow enables customers to apply these capabilities at line-rate in 10 GbE and 100 GbE networks and is first to deliver an OpenFlow solution deployable in hybrid mode. With hybrid mode, customers may consume traditional L2/3 forwarding methods and OpenFlow forwarding simultaneously. This unique capability enables network operators to integrate OpenFlow into an existing network gaining the programmatic control offered by SDN for specific flows while the remaining traffic is forwarded via traditional routing.
Openflow support delivered through NetIron 5.4 software allows network operators to have programmatic control over their networks, including methods of advanced traffic management, flood management, and data security. This software will become available in the third quarter of 2012, and supports the Brocade MLX, CER, and CES series routers and switches. Brocade’s support for OpenFlow allows customers to apply these features in 10 GbE and 100 GbE networks. It is also the first support system to feature a hybrid mode. In hybrid mode, network operators can integrate OpenFlow into existing networks simultaneously allowing portions of the network traffic to continue on via traditional routing methods such as L2/3 forwarding.
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We've changed up section 31 of the Outer Continental Shelf Lands Act (43 U.S.C. 1356a) in a couple big ways. The first change we made was to get rid of paragraph (7) in subsection (a) entirely. We then bumped down the numberings of paragraphs (8), (9), and (10) by one to fill the gap left where original paragraph (7) was. We also replaced a subparagraph (B) in paragraph (8) with the following line, "(B) Inclusion. The term 'producing State' includes any State that begins production on a leased tract on or after the date of enactment of the Outer Continental Shelf Revenue Sharing Act of 2005, regardless of whether the leased tract was on any date subject to a leasing moratorium.''. We also got rid of subparagraph (C) in paragraph (9), and we shook up subsection (b)(4) by cutting out subparagraph (E).
Section 31 of the Outer Continental Shelf Lands Act (43 U.S.C. 1356a) is amended--(1) in subsection (a)--(A) by striking paragraph (7);(B) by redesignating paragraphs (8), (9), and (10) as paragraphs (7), (8), and (9), respectively;(C) in paragraph (8) (as redesignated by subparagraph (B)), by striking subparagraph (B) and inserting the following:``(B) Inclusion.--The term `producing State' includes any State that begins production on a leased tract on or after the date of enactment of the Outer Continental Shelf Revenue Sharing Act of 2005, regardless of whether the leased tract was on any date subject to a leasing moratorium.''; and(D) in paragraph (9) (as redesignated by subparagraph (B)), by striking subparagraph (C); and(2) in subsection (b)(4), by striking subparagraph (E).
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New technologies and buyer habits have created lots of major changes in telecommunications recently. That's why the Federal Communications Commission (FCC) has taken steps to free cable and video service providers from some of the regulations of local governments. These policy changes have received some pushback though, with many local governments complaining that the FCC is hurting their abilities to protect public interest and cutting them off from a source of money.
As technological developments and changes in business strategies and consumer behavior have reshaped the telecommunications industry, the Federal Communications Commission (FCC) has taken several steps to limit local regulatory authority over cable and telco video service providers. Many of these regulatory changes have caused controversy. Some local governments assert that, among other things, the FCC's actions will limit their ability to protect the public interest and deprive them of revenue.
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So, in Jan 10, 2020, the DUP and Sinn Fein agreed to a deal to bring back the devolved govt. This was planned by the UK and Irish govts. The new assembly started working the next day. The power-sharing deal covers a bunch of key issues, including how the Irish language is going to be used and increased UK financial aid to Northern Ireland. The deal also calls for Northern Ireland's Executive, which is led by DUP First Minister Arlene Foster and Sinn Fein Deputy First Minister Michelle O'Neill, to set up a Brexit subcommittee to look at Brexit's impact on Northern Ireland. It also highlights the UK government's commitment to including Northern Ireland Executive officials in UK-EU Joint Committee meetings aimed at applying the agreed-upon conditions for Northern Ireland post-Brexit.
On January 10, 2020, the DUP and Sinn Fein agreed to a deal to restore the devolved government put forward by the UK and Irish governments. The new Assembly convened the following day. The power-sharing deal addresses a number of key issues, including use of the Irish language, and promises additional UK financial support for Northern Ireland. The deal also calls for Northern Ireland's Executive, led by DUP First Minister Arlene Foster and Sinn Fein Deputy First Minister Michelle O'Neill, to establish a Brexit subcommittee to assess Brexit's implications for Northern Ireland. In addition, it reaffirms the UK government's commitment to including Northern Ireland Executive representatives in upcoming UK-EU Joint Committee meetings that will seek to implement the agreed arrangements for Northern Ireland post-Brexit.
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The University of Puerto Rico was founded as a land-grant institution in 1908, when Congress allowed Puerto Rico to reap the benefits of both Morrill Acts. The University of the District of Columbia was known as the Federal City College when it was founded as a land-grant school in 1968, thanks to amendment (P.L. 90-354) of Title I of the District of Columbia Public Education Act of 1966 (P.L. 89-791). The US Virgin Islands and Guam got their colleges through land-grants in 1972, from section 506 of the Educational Amendments of 1972 (P.L. 92-318). American Samoa and the Federated States of Micronesia got theirs almost the same way, from the Educational Amendments of 1980 ( P.L. 96-374 §1361). A college in the Northern Mariana Islands was added in 1986 ( P.L. 99-396 §9).
The University of Puerto Rico, Mayaguez was established as a land-grant institution in 1908 after the benefits of the first and second Morrill Acts were extended to Puerto Rico. The University of the District of Columbia, at the time known as Federal City College, received land-grant status in 1968 through amendment (P.L. 90-354) of Title I of the District of Columbia Public Education Act of 1966 (P.L. 89-791). Colleges in the U.S. Virgin Islands and Guam became land-grant institutions through Section 506 of the Educational Amendments of 1972 (P.L. 92-318). Institutions in American Samoa and what is now the Federated States of Micronesia received similar recognition through the Educational Amendments of 1980 ( P.L. 96-374 §1361). A college in the Northern Mariana Islands was added in 1986 ( P.L. 99-396 §9).
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We've changed section 4(a)(2)(A) of the Outer Continental Shelf Lands Act (43 U.S.C. 1333(a)(2)(A)) first by adding in "(i)" after "(A)" in the first sentence, and by replacing the line, "President shall'' with "Secretary shall by regulation". We also added the phrase, "not later than 180 days after the date of enactment of the Outer Continental Shelf Revenue Sharing Act of 2005" to the end of the sentence, and put the following phrase into subsection (ii)(I): "For purposes of calculating the costs and incomes associated with rented out this space, the Secretary will draw the lines between coastal State territory and Federal waters to the extent of the exclusive economic zone of the United States, according to article 15 of the United Nations Convention on the Law of the Sea of December 10, 1982. Also, this won't affect any ownership of any underwater Federal land on the outer Continental Shelf.".
Section 4(a)(2)(A) of the Outer Continental Shelf Lands Act (43 U.S.C. 1333(a)(2)(A)) is amended--(1) by inserting ``(i)'' after ``(A)'';(2) in the first sentence--(A) by striking ``President shall'' and inserting ``Secretary shall by regulation''; and(B) by inserting before the period at the end the following: ``not later than 180 days after the date of enactment of the Outer Continental Shelf Revenue Sharing Act of 2005''; and(3) by adding at the end the following:``(ii)(I) For purposes of this Act (including determining boundaries to authorize leasing and preleasing activities and any attributing revenues under this Act and calculating payments to producing States and coastal political subdivisions under section 31), the Secretary shall delineate the lateral boundaries between coastal States in areas of the Outer Continental shelf under exclusive Federal jurisdiction, to the extent of the exclusive economic zone of the United States, in accordance with article 15 of the United Nations Convention on the Law of the Sea of December 10, 1982.``(II) This clause shall not affect any right or title to Federal submerged land on the outer Continental Shelf.''.
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Now that the ship is in the open sea, the up and down of the ship had me turning green, and my belly was so empty before I even got on this thing that no matter how tasty the food it just make the stomach ache worse. The root of my tummy's awful way was probably caused by only having a tiny bit of hard, stale bread once every 24 hours in bottom parts of the convent. The ring of vesper bells also came along with it water that the holy Mother Abbess used to wash her feet and that I drank. I would like to thank holy mother for not using soap in her water at least.
After we got out into the open sea, the motion of the ship made me feel very sick, and I was so starved out before I came on board, that what good provisions I ate on board did not seem to agree with me. My stomach was in a very bad state, for while I was in the lower regions of the convent I ate only a small quantity of very stale hard bread once in twenty-four hours, at the ringing of the vesper bells every evening, and the water given me was that in which the holy Mother Abbess had washed her sacred feet. But I must give the holy mother credit for one good omission--she did not use any soap.
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(a) Usually.--The strength of notable domain will be accessible only for general use.(b) General Use.--In this Law, the phrase “general use'' will not be confused with financial growth.(c) Administration.--This Law will administer to--(1) all practices of notable domain strength by the Country-Wide Legislation; and(2) all practices of notable domain strength by State and community legislation through the use of country-wide costs.
(a) In General.--The power of eminent domain shall be available only for public use.(b) Public Use.--In this Act, the term ``public use'' shall not be construed to include economic development.(c) Application.--This Act shall apply to--(1) all exercises of eminent domain power by the Federal Government; and(2) all exercises of eminent domain power by State and local government through the use of Federal funds.
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Section 612 of the Fair Credit Reporting Act (15 U.S.C. 1681j) is changed--(1) in subsection (f)(1), in the matter before subparagraph (A), by putting in``or subsection (h)'' after ``through (d)''; and(2) by putting in the following at the end:``(h) Free Disclosures Connecting With Credit Freeze.--In addition to the free yearly disclosure required under subsection (a)(1)(A), each buyer reporting agency that maintains a file on a buyer who requests a credit freeze under section 605A(i) can make all disclosures in accordance to section 609 once during any year without charge to the buyer if the buyer makes a request under section 609.''.
Section 612 of the Fair Credit Reporting Act (15 U.S.C. 1681j) is amended--(1) in subsection (f)(1), in the matter preceding subparagraph (A), by inserting ``or subsection (h)'' after ``through (d)''; and(2) by adding at the end the following:``(h) Free Disclosures in Connection With Credit Freeze.--In addition to the free annual disclosure required under subsection (a)(1)(A), each consumer reporting agency that maintains a file on a consumer who requests a credit freeze under section 605A(i) shall make all disclosures pursuant to section 609 once during any 12-month period without charge to the consumer if the consumer makes a request under section 609.''.
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In reference to a 2014 study that was done by the National Center for Education Statistics (NCES) within the U.S. Department of Education (ED), 53% of public elementary and secondary schools have gotta spend money on repairs, renovations, and keeping their buildings up to date so it can all be considered good condition. The study suggested that the whole country would have to spend around $197 billion to reach this standard, or about $4.5 million per school that needs to make things better. The 2014 study was the first by NCES to guess costs like that since a 2000 report and is the newest one available. As there’s still federal data collection going on about the physical condition of schools, it’s hard to say what the current state of the nation's school facilities is and what the need for infrastructure investment could be.
According to a 2014 study conducted by the National Center for Education Statistics (NCES) within the U.S. Department of Education (ED), 53% of public elementary and secondary schools need to spend money on repairs, renovations, and modernizations to put their onsite buildings in good overall condition. The study estimated that the nationwide spending necessary to reach this standard would be approximately $197 billion, or about $4.5 million per school that needs improvements. The 2014 study was the first by NCES to estimate such costs since a 2000 report and is the most recent available. As there is no ongoing federal data collection on the physical condition of schools, it is difficult to assess the current state of the nation's school facilities and the need for infrastructure investment.
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Most of the hardship has fallen on the shoulders of the meek, mild, and innocent. Women have been treated like vile creatures and children have been stomped on like rats. Countless shrines have been watered with the blood of babies, beautiful girls have been sacrificed to disgusting beasts, and whole nations of people have been condemned to centuries of slavery. Everywhere there's been such a great general feeling of outrage that we can't even begin to fully express it. Throughout all these times of suffering, the dying and downtrodden have begged, the starving masses in the midst of famines have prayed, countless victims of enormous cruelty have cried out for help, and all the while God did nothing.
Most of the misery has been endured by the weak, the loving and the innocent. Women have been treated like poisonous beasts, and little children trampled upon as though they had been vermin. Numberless altars have been reddened, even with the blood of babes; beautiful girls have been given to slimy serpents; whole races of men doomed to centuries of slavery, and everywhere there has been outrage beyond the power of genius to express. During all these years the suffering have supplicated; the withered lips of famine have prayed; the pale victims have implored, and Heaven has been deaf and blind.
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John Buchanan and I discussed TW's transfer of gas from the PG&E/Topock receipt/delivery point to the PG&E/Topock Park N' Ride point to implement TW's use of PG&E's Market Center service. My understanding is that physically the points are one and the same, and that the transaction will simply be a paper transfer. Since a contract is required in our system as a formality to implement the transfer, the rate TW will "charge" itself for the transfer is $0. This message is to confirm that I see no legal or regulatory problems with the above scenario. If you have any further questions, please do not hesitate to e-mail or call me (x30596).
John Buchanan and I initiated a discourse involving TW’s relocation of fuel from the PG&E/Topock receipt/transportation location to the PG&E/Topock Park N’ Ride point to administer TW’s utilization of PG&E’s Market Center facility. My recollection is that tangibly the locations are the same, and the only transference will be of paper. Since a legal agreement is vital in our network as a procedure to execute the transference, the expenditure TW will “charge” itself is $0. This note is to affirm that I do not see any complications in a lawful or administrative perspective with this sequence of events. If any inquiries should come up, do not be apprehensive to electronically mail or call me (x30596).
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After many abortive ceasefires, the war ended in a peace accord and general elections in 1997, which Taylor won by a lot. In '99, an incursion by Liberian rebels based in Guinea grew into a 2nd nationwide event that had Taylor's army fighting 2 insurgencies. After years of fighting, a rebel assault on the capital Monrovia and mounting int'l. pressure including U.N. sanctions and public demand from Pres. Bush that Taylor resign forced Taylor to step down in 2003. Days after, a peace agreement ceased the fighting and laid the base for a transitional govt. The U.N. Security Council created a peacekeeping mission, the U.N. Mission in Liberia (UNMIL) in Sept. 2003 to help the country.
After a series of abortive ceasefires, the war ended in a peace accord and general elections in 1997, which Taylor won by a wide margin. In 1999, an incursion by Liberian rebels based in neighboring Guinea grew into a second nationwide conflict that pitted Taylor's army against two insurgent factions. After years of fighting, a rebel assault on the capital, Monrovia, and mounting international pressure—including U.N. sanctions and a public demand from President George W. Bush that Taylor resign—ultimately forced Taylor to step down in 2003. Days later, a peace agreement officially ended the conflict and laid the foundations for a transitional government. The U.N. Security Council established a peacekeeping mission, the U.N. Mission in Liberia (UNMIL), in September 2003 to help stabilize the country.
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"Nighthawk, old boy," they heard Raven say, his hand patting the animal's shoulder, "he has done for you, I fear." His voice came in broken cries. The great horse lifted his beautiful head and looked toward his master. "Ah my boy, we have had many journeys together!" cried Raven, throwing his arm around the glossy neck, "and on this final one we won't be far apart." The horse whinnied, nosing into his master's hand and laid his head down again. A slight quiver, and he was still forever. "Ah, he has gone," cried Raven. "My best, only friend."
"Nighthawk, old boy," they heard Raven say, his hand patting the shoulder of the noble animal, "he has done for you, I fear." His voice came in broken sobs. The great horse lifted his beautiful head and looked round toward his master. "Ah, my boy, we have done many a journey together!" cried Raven as he threw his arm around the glossy neck, "and on this last one too we shall not be far apart." The horse gave a slight whinny, nosed into his master's hand and laid his head down again. A slight quiver of the limbs and he was still for ever. "Ah, he has gone!" cried Raven, "my best, my only friend."
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There're changes in Section 9(b)(6) of the National School Lunch Act (42 U.S.C. 1758(b)(6)). In subparagraph (A), in the matter before the clause, the changes have been made by removing "a member of" in clause (i)--(i), by adding "a member of" after "(i)" in clause (i), and by striking "or" at the end of the clause. Also, by inserting "a member of" after "(ii)" in clause (ii) and striking the period at the end of the clause and inserting "; or" and adding a new clause (iii) that states that a student is eligible for free or reduced-price lunches if they are enrolled in a Head Start program under the Head Start Act (42 U.S.C. 9831 et seq.). There're changes in subparagraph (B) as well. "Food stamps or aid to families with dependent children" is removed and replaced with "food stamps, aid to families with dependent children, or enrollment or participation in a Head Start program".
Section 9(b)(6) of the National School Lunch Act (42 U.S.C. 1758(b)(6)) is amended--(1) in subparagraph (A)--(A) in the matter preceding clause (i), by striking ``a member of'';(B) in clause (i)--(i) by inserting ``a member of'' after ``(i)''; and(ii) by striking ``or'' at the end of the clause;(C) in clause (ii)--(i) by inserting ``a member of'' after ``(ii)''; and(ii) by striking the period at the end of the clause and inserting ``; or''; and(D) by adding at the end the following new clause:``(iii) enrolled as a participant in a Head Start program authorized under the Head Start Act (42 U.S.C. 9831 et seq.).''; and(2) in subparagraph (B), by striking ``food stamps or aid to families with dependent children'' and inserting ``food stamps, aid to families with dependent children, or enrollment or participation in a Head Start program''.
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(a) Definition of Political Committee.--Section 301(4)(A) of the Federal Election Campaign Act of 1971 (2 U.S.C. 431(4)(A)) is changed to state this:``(A) any committee, club, association, or other group of people that--``(i) during one year, receives donations more than $1,000 or makes profit more than $1,000; and``(ii) has as its major function the nomination or election of one or more candidates;''.(b) Definition of Major Purpose for Section 527 Organizations.--Title III of the Federal Election Campaign Act of 1971 (2 U.S.C. 431 et seq.) is changed by adding this new section at the end:
(a) Definition of Political Committee.--Section 301(4)(A) of the Federal Election Campaign Act of 1971 (2 U.S.C. 431(4)(A)) is amended to read as follows:``(A) any committee, club, association, or other group of persons that--``(i) during one calendar year, receives contributions aggregating in excess of $1,000 or makes expenditures aggregating in excess of $1,000; and``(ii) has as its major purpose the nomination or election of one or more candidates;''.(b) Definition of Major Purpose for Section 527 Organizations.--Title III of the Federal Election Campaign Act of 1971 (2 U.S.C. 431 et seq.) is amended by adding at the end the following new section:
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(a) Establishment.—The President will create an independent, nonpartisan Commission inside the executive branch to find out and get all the details of what happened in terms of damage caused by Hurricane Katrina on or between Friday, August 26, 2005, and Tuesday, August 30, 2005. (b) Deadline for Establishment—The President shall put to effect an executive order creating a Commission in the next 30 days after the Act goes into effect.
(a) Establishment.--The President shall establish an independent, nonpartisan Commission within the executive branch to discover and assess the circumstances related to the damage caused by Hurricane Katrina on or between Friday, August 26, 2005, and Tuesday, August 30, 2005.(b) Deadline for Establishment.--The President shall issue an executive order establishing a Commission within 30 days after the date of enactment of this Act.
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(a) Appointments—Subject to the rules and regulations as may be used by the Commission, the Chairman of the Commission will have the power to set a fixed compensation of a Director and extra staff personnel, but it can’t go over 15 staff members, as the Chairman thinks is necessary. (b) Applicability of Certain Civil Service Laws.—The Director and staff of the Commission can be placed w/o regard to provisions of title 5, U.S. Code, concerning appointments in the competitive service, and can be paid w/o regard to provisions of chapter 51 and subchapter III of chapter 53 of the title talking about classification and General Schedule pay rates; except that an individual so placed may not get pay over the rate of basic pay payable of level I of the Executive Schedule. (c) Qualifications.—In making placements according to this section, the Chairman of the Commission will be included among the Chairman’s placement of individuals set by the Chairman to be good social scientist, lawyers, law enforcement officers, and other with pro expertise on topics about gambling.
(a) Appointments.--Subject to such rules and regulations as may be adopted by the Commission, the Chairman of the Commission shall have the power to appoint and fix the compensation of a Director and such additional staff personnel (but not to exceed 15 staff members) as the Chairman considers necessary.(b) Applicability of Certain Civil Service Laws.--The Director and staff of the Commission may be appointed without regard to the provisions of title 5, United States Code, governing appointments in the competitive service, and may be paid without regard to the provisions of chapter 51 and subchapter III of chapter 53 of such title relating to classification and General Schedule pay rates; except that an individual so appointed may not receive pay in excess of the rate of basic pay payable for level I of the Executive Schedule.(c) Qualifications.--In making appointments pursuant to this section, the Chairman of the Commission shall include among the Chairman's appointments individuals determined by the Chairman to be competent social scientists, lawyers, law enforcement officers, and others with professional expertise in areas related to gambling.
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Hey Chris, I was wondering if there was a fax number at the base so that my apartment complex can send you some info. regarding getting your name taken off of our lease. If there is, just shoot me off an email with the number and I'll pass it along to them. Hope things are going well and that you're not too homesick with Thanksgiving and all. I have a feeling I will be talking to you guys tomorrow along with both of our parents and extended family members. Have a great holiday and root on the Horns ( I think this is going to be a tough one). Love,
Dear Chris, I just wanted to know if there was a fax number at the base so that my apartment complex could send you information about having your name removed from our lease. If so, please send me an email with the phone number, and I will give it to them. I hope everything is going well and that, despite Thanksgiving, you are not feeling homesick. I anticipate speaking with you two, as well as both of our parents and other relatives, tomorrow. Enjoy your holiday and support the Horns (I think this is going to be a tough one). With love.
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Before the 2017 polls, shifts were done to council district borders in 25 areas. This meant that trying to find any similarities or differences with the actual stats from 2012 couldn’t be precise because of the bit of growth in the amount of seats (from 1,223 to 1,227), different borders, and some districts getting their amount of councilors changed. This led BBC News, using work done by Professor David Denver of Lancaster University, to gauge what the votes would have been in 2012 if the new borders and seat amounts had been there for that poll.
Prior to the 2017 elections, changes were made to council ward boundaries in 25 council areas. This meant that comparisons with the actual results from 2012 were inaccurate due to a small increase in the total number of seats (from 1,223 to 1,227), different boundaries, and some wards having their number of councillors adjusted. These changes led BBC News, using work done by Professor David Denver of Lancaster University, to estimate what the results would have been in 2012 if the new boundaries and seat numbers had been in place for that election.
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Thanks to tons of new data about human movements, we're learning a lot about how social networks, people's movements, and dynamic processes like epidemics relate to one another. In this study we looked at how long people spent face-to-face in different environments. The two scenarios we focused on here were a science conference and a long-term museum exhibition. We kept track of how many times people interacted face-to-face, and for how long, then we studied these interactions to find the similarities and differences between them. We'll use this data to predict how epidemics might behave under different social circumstances. We found that epidemics would spread much differently between the conference and the museum scenarios. Diving deeper into the methods of disease spreading in those scenarios shows us that awareness of the many interactions between the different social networks would lead people into buying false ideas about how disease would spread across those networks.
The availability of new data sources on human mobility is opening new avenues for investigating the interplay of social networks, human mobility and dynamical processes such as epidemic spreading. Here we analyze data on the time - resolved face - to - face proximity of individuals in large - scale real - world scenarios. We compare two settings with very different properties, a scientific conference and a long - running museum exhibition. We track the behavioral networks of face - to - face proximity, and characterize them from both a static and a dynamic point of view, exposing differences and similarities. We use our data to investigate the dynamics of a susceptible - infected model for epidemic spreading that unfolds on the dynamical networks of human proximity. The spreading patterns are markedly different for the conference and the museum case, and they are strongly impacted by the causal structure of the network data. A deeper study of the spreading paths shows that the mere knowledge of static aggregated networks would lead to erroneous conclusions about the transmission paths on the dynamical networks.
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On September 30th, 2005, the Weinstein bros left Miramax to start their own production company, The Weinstein Company. They started this venture with several other media execs, directors Quentin Tarantino and Robert Rodriguez, and Colin Vaines, who'd run Miramax's production department for a decade. In February of 2011, filmmaker Michael Moore sued the Weinstein bros, claiming they owed him $2.7 million in profit from his documentary, Fahrenheit 9/11 (2004). Moore claimed that the profits had been stolen from him through "Hollywood accounting tricks." Moore settled the lawsuit out of court for an undisclosed amount a year later. The Weinstein Company was forced into bankruptcy and sold all their assets to Lantern Entertainment in 2018, after scores of sexual misconduct allegations. The company was fully shut down on July 16th, 2018, and the website soon after.
The Weinstein brothers left Miramax on September 30, 2005, to form their own production company, The Weinstein Company, with several other media executives, directors Quentin Tarantino and Robert Rodriguez, and Colin Vaines, who had successfully run the production department at Miramax for 10 years. In February 2011, filmmaker Michael Moore took legal action against the Weinstein brothers, claiming he was owed $2.7 million in profits for his documentary Fahrenheit 9/11 (2004), which he said had been denied to him by "Hollywood accounting tricks". In February 2012, Moore dropped the lawsuit for an undisclosed settlement. In the aftermath of the sexual misconduct allegations against Weinstein, the company was forced into bankruptcy, with Lantern Entertainment purchasing all assets in 2018. The company was shut down on July 16, 2018 and the website sometime thereafter.
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System Outage Notification Outage Description: All SAP systems (including Prod Interface, all EBP systems, IPayIt and FTP servers) will be shutdown in order to upgrade our storage hardware. This maintenance is required to ensure that sufficient storage is available for the SAP Production systems. Date & Time of Outage: Outage Commences: November 9, 2001 @ 8:00pm CST Outage Ends: November 12, 2001 @ 2:00am CST Contacts: Contact: Contact Information:
System Outage Notification Description: All SAP systems (including Prod Interface, all EBP systems, IPAYIt and FTP servers) will be temporarily offline while upgrades are performed on the storage hardware. Maintenance of this sort is indispensable if adequate storage space is to be ensured for all SAP Production systems. Date and Time of Outage: Outage Commences: The ninth of November, 2001, at eight o'clock p.m. (Central Standard Time) Outage Ends: The twelfth of November, 2001, at two o'clock a.m. (Central Standard Time). Contacts: Contact: Contact Information:
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Because an across-the-board rate reduction doesn’t really stimulate things too well, its cost effectiveness isn’t great either. Even though households that are in the lower tax bracket would get a benefit, most tax reductions like that would go out to taxpayers who make more money. This is because households that make more money pay an unequal share of income taxes. But as we’ve already talked about, these households are assumed not to be as responsive to more after-tax income as lower- and middle-income households. Combined with a likely big loss in money from an across-the-board rate reduction, this means that the "bang for the buck" would be low. The effect of the stimulus is brought even further down if sizable shortfalls lead to higher interest rates, crowding out private investment.
Because the stimuluative effect of an across-the-board rate reduction is low, so too is its cost effectiveness. Although households in the lower tax brackets would receive a benefit, the majority of such a tax reduction would flow to taxpayers at the upper end of the income distribution. This is because higher-income households pay a disproportionate share of income taxes. But as previously discussed, these households are estimated not to be as responsive to increases in after-tax income as lower- and moderate-income households. Combined with a likely large revenue loss from an across-the-board rate reduction, this implies that the "bang for the buck" would be low. The stimulative effect is further diminished if sizable deficits lead to higher interest rates, crowding out private investment.
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Dear Ken . . . I'm truly heartbroken at the "perfect storm" which seems to have engulfed Enron. I'm sure that last few months have been unbelievably stressful for you personally. YI wanted you to know that you can call on me, anytime, anywhere and under any circumstances if I can be of any help whatsoever--no compensation expected. It is my hope that
Dear Ken . . . I am thoroughly devastated by the "perfect storm" that has consumed Enron. I am certain that the last few months have been extremely arduous for you. I want to inform you that can you depend on me for assistance regardless of time, place, or circumstances. I do not require compensation. It is my sincere hope that
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The trials where we look at quantum phenomena in heavily linked many particle systems is hard to do because of how short they are and how little time there is to do them. Getting it at the same time rate control of individual parts seems like it’s even harder to challenge, which means it’s even harder to date inhibits using systems like quantum computing devices. We’ve made a lot of progress to overcome these problems with cold atoms in optical lattices, where a detailed control of collective properties is possible but it’s super difficult to address, so it’s harder to control or measure distinct sites. Here we’re showing, that polaritons, used with atom and photon excitations, in a bunch of cavities like a photonic crystal or coupled toroidal micro-cavities, can make a strongly interacting many body system, where distinct particles can be controlled and measured. Everything needed to build the suggested setting has already happened through tests, which shows just what this device can do as a quantum simulator. Since it’s possible to make attractive on-site potentials, the scheme allows the formation of really entangled states and a phase with particles a lot more delocalized than in superfluids.
The experimental observation of quantum phenomena in strongly correlated many particle systems is difficult because of the short length- and timescales involved. Obtaining at the same time detailed control of individual constituents appears even more challenging and thus to date inhibits employing such systems as quantum computing devices. Substantial progress to overcome these problems has been achieved with cold atoms in optical lattices, where a detailed control of collective properties is feasible but it is very difficult to address and hence control or measure individual sites. Here we show, that polaritons, combined atom and photon excitations, in an array of cavities such as a photonic crystal or coupled toroidal micro - cavities, can form a strongly interacting many body system, where individual particles can be controlled and measured. All individual building blocks of the proposed setting have already been experimentally realised, thus demonstrating the potential of this device as a quantum simulator. With the possibility to create attractive on - site potentials the scheme allows for the creation of highly entangled states and a phase with particles much more delocalised than in superfluids.
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Some contend ASWJ, like many African Islamist armed forces, are largely made up of spurned youth influenced by Islamist ideas but are driven mostly by anger over local issues (economics, limited/poor state services/unemployment). Other sources of local anger the group exploits include loss of local agriculture and fishing, seizing of land by local/state elites, and nontransparency and corruption in compensation processes assoc. w/ the growth of natural gas/gemstone mining fields. Other causes for tension are rivalries over land/political affiliations between Catholic Makonde and Muslim Mwani peoples, among other local ethnicities.
Some analysts contend that ASWJ, like many African Islamist armed groups, largely comprises disaffected youth who may be influenced by Islamist ideology but are driven primarily by anger over local grievances (e.g., economic disparities, limited or poor state services, and high unemployment). Other notably intense sources of local anger that the group may exploit include the loss of local agricultural and fishing livelihoods, the seizure of land by local and state elites, and nontransparency and corruption in compensation processes associated with the growth of the natural gas and gemstone mining industries. Other sources of local tension are rivalries, including over land and political party affiliation, between the mostly Catholic Makonde and mostly Muslim Mwani people, among other local ethnic groups.
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Material is "inter-agency or intra agency" if it comes from an "agency," as to what that term is considered to mean by FOIA. Some courts have also acknowledged what’s called the "consultant corollary," where Exemption 5 keeps certain materials that’ve been given to an agency by outside advisors. Either way, Exemption 5 doesn’t keep all the things communicated like that safe. In DOI v. Klamath Water Users Protective Association , for example, the Supreme Court said that info given to DOI by some Native American tribes about the distribution of water rights didn’t form "intra-agency" records because the tribes had "talk[ed] with the [agency] with their own, albeit super legit, interests in mind" and wanted "a Government benefit at the expense of other applicants."
Material is "inter-agency or intra agency" if it originates from an "agency," as that term is defined by FOIA. Some courts have also recognized what is known as the "consultant corollary," under which Exemption 5 protects certain materials that have been supplied to an agency by external consultants. Nonetheless, Exemption 5 does not protect all such communications. In DOI v. Klamath Water Users Protective Association , for example, the Supreme Court held that information submitted to DOI by certain American Indian tribes concerning the allocation of water rights did not constitute "intra-agency" records because the tribes had "communicate[d] with the [agency] with their own, albeit entirely legitimate, interests in mind" and sought "a Government benefit at the expense of other applicants."
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In 2002, the Royal Opera House of Covent Garden asked him to come by and perform the Seven Pavilion Ballet, a piece based on the writings of the Nezami (a really good Persian poet). His last work came out in 2007, and was called "Dance Variations on Persian themes". It was a great big collection of all his best dance plans, performed with Karine Gonzales, the top dancer in his company. His Omar Khayyam Ballet (based on Omar Khayyam's poems from way back in 12th century Persia), was so good that it was shown in Paris, London, Stockholm, New York, and Los Angeles. He has yet another set of very well received dances called the Mythological Danses which were performed across Europe and America many times. These were inspired by three Persian love stories: Khosrow and Shirin, Bahram and Dorsatti, and lastly, Sohrab and Gordafarid.
In 2002 the Royal Opera House of Covent Garden invited him to perform Seven Pavilion Ballet based on the works of great Persian poet Nezami. Dance Variations on Persian themes created in 2007 is his last work which is a collection of his best choreographies performed with Karine Gonzales the major dancer of his company. His Omar Khayyam Ballet inspired by the quatrains of 12th-century Persian poet Omar Khayyam has been performed in Paris, London, Stockholm, New York and Los Angeles. The Mythological Danses inspired by the three love stories (Khosrow and Shirin, Bahram and Dorsatti, Sohrab and Gordafarid) is also a very successful series of Persian dances which has been performed in Europe and North America several times.
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Cavity quantum electrodynamic schemes for quantum gates are part of some of the first quantum computing ideas. Sure, there's continued advancement and the recent demo of photon blockade, but there're still problems with efficient coupling and gate function in terms of high quality cavities. So we're going to show how a dynamic cavity control permits for scalable cavity - qed based quantum gates using the entire bandwith of the cavity. This technique can give us an order of magnitude increase in operating speed, and these 2 orders will reduce the cavity @xmath0, over passive systems. Our system will make use of stark shift based @xmath0 switching, and is ideally the right way to go for a solid state united optical accesses to quantum computing.
Cavity quantum electrodynamic schemes for quantum gates are amongst the earliest quantum computing proposals. Despite continued progress and the recent demonstration of photon blockade, there are still issues with optimal coupling and gate operation involving high - quality cavities. Here we show that dynamic cavity control allows for scalable cavity - qed based quantum gates using the full cavity bandwidth. This technique allows an order of magnitude increase in operating speed, and two orders reduction in cavity @xmath0, over passive systems. Our method exploits stark shift based @xmath0 switching, and is ideally suited to solid - state integrated optical approaches to quantum computing.
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Below is the Enron 2002 holiday schedule. Remember, Enron's offices will be closed in observance of Martin Luther King Day this coming Monday, January 21. Enjoy the long weekend! New Year's Day Tuesday, January 1 Martin Luther King Day Monday, January 21 President's Day Monday, February 18 Memorial Day Monday, May 27 Independence Day Thursday, July 4 Labor Day Monday, September 2 Thanksgiving Day Thursday, November 28 Thanksgiving Observance Friday, November 29
Please find Enron’s 2002 holiday schedule below. It is vital that you are aware of Enron’s closure in observance of Martin Luther King Day this coming Monday, January 21st. Ensure that you enjoy the extended weekend: New Year's Day Tuesday, January 1st Martin Luther King Day Monday, January 21st President's Day Monday, February 18th Memorial Day Monday, May 27th Independence Day Thursday, July 4th Labor Day Monday, September 2nd Thanksgiving Day Thursday, November 28th Thanksgiving Observance Friday, November 29th.
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We report an ongoing analysis of high-res uv spectra of hot hydrogen-rich central stars of planetary nebulae (cspn), gotten with the hubble telescope and fuse. Since uv spectra of cspn are dominated by fe/ni lines, we use them as temp indicators to check cspn temp scale we have derived before from cno ionization balances. The observed line strengths of heavy metals show big differences between different objects. This suggests a possible spread in amounts. We'll determine abundances of iron group elements by quantitative spectral analyses with non-lte model atmospheres.
We report on an on - going analysis of high - resolution uv spectra of hot hydrogen - rich central stars of planetary nebulae ( cspn ), obtained with the hubble space telescope and fuse. Since uv spectra of many cspn are dominated by fe and ni lines, we intend to use them as temperature indicators to check the cspn temperature scale we have derived earlier from cno ionization balances. Furthermore, the observed line strengths of heavy metals show large variations between different objects suggesting a possible spread in abundances. We will determine abundances of iron group elements by quantitative spectral analyses with non - lte model atmospheres.
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We're gonna talk about how evolution naturally creates a tiered class system through changes in individual nature. We'll show you how these transitions come about from the forces of natural selection acting on different levels of the biological process. The main transition happens at one specific point in the evolutionary process, and we're gonna show how that point matches up with a phase transition in how information gets passed along through the creation of self-completing info bottlenecks. We've even got an abstract model to use for describing these transitions, that is vague enough to be able to apply to many different versions of the same idea. Look at multicellularity for instance, specifically a randomly generated model of individuals in a community (cells) transition into a more teamwork based community (multicellularity). This transition point can be found by noting when the number of cells needed to make new communities drops far below the previous number needed to make new communities. In that way, the communites as a whole start reproducing more even as the individual cells involved do it less. We also showed that horizontal gene transfer greatly lowers the bar required to make this process happen. And right there we've got two of the most important parts of multicellularity: the growth of a developmental process and reproduction through a unicellular bottleneck.
We explain how hierarchical organization of biological systems emerges naturally during evolution, through a transition in the units of individuality. We will show how these transitions are the result of competing selective forces operating at different levels of organization, each level having different units of individuality. Such a transition represents a singular point in the evolutionary process, which we will show corresponds to a phase transition in the way information is encoded, with the formation of self - reinforcing information bottlenecks. We present an abstract model for characterizing these transitions that is quite general, applicable to many different versions of such transitions. As a concrete example, we consider the transition to multicellularity. Specifically, we study a stochastic model where isolated communities of interacting individuals ( e.g. Cells ) undergo a transition to higher - order individuality ( e.g. Multicellularity ). This transition is indicated by the marked decrease in the number of cells utilized to generate new communities from pre - existing ones. In this sense, the community begins to reproduce as a whole via a decreasing number of cells. We show that the fitness barrier to this transition is strongly reduced by horizontal gene transfer. These features capture two of the most prominent aspects of the transition to multicellularity: the evolution of a developmental process and reproduction through a unicellular bottleneck.
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Only a piece of the organ, specifically the smaller passages may have something to do with the reduction, and this could be only for patches or pieces of the organ. The amyloid change may allow associated syphilitic gummata , or the liver could have more or less progress in fatty reduction or in cirrhosis. Those pieces of the organ not affected by the sickness are not usually totally regular, they are more or less inky by venous congestion, noticeably softer, etc. The amyloid change does not only affect the liver, but grows to the kidneys, lymphatic glands, the intestinal mucous membrane, etc.
Only a part of the organ--namely, the smaller vessels--may be involved in the degeneration, and this may be restricted to patches or parts of the organ. With the amyloid change there may be associated syphilitic gummata, or the liver may be more or less advanced in fatty degeneration or in cirrhosis. Those parts of the organ not invaded by the disease are not often entirely normal; they are more or less darkened in color by venous congestion, distinctly softer, etc. The amyloid change is not limited to the liver, but extends to the kidneys, lymphatic glands, the intestinal mucous membrane, etc.
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The novel is about the adventures of a 13 year old boy named Bill and his magic walking stick. This stick has the power to take Bill and anyone holding his hand, to wherever he wants to go. From "the blinding white sands of the Solomon Islands ... [to] the rowans and birches of a wintry Highland Glen." He has various misadventures like visiting an elephant in a graveyard, playing a prank some snooty neighbors, and even helps a troubled young prince back into a Balkan kingdom. When Bill hears a legend, it makes him think that his magic stick could've been one of the two staves talked about in the Book of Zechariah 11:7, but whether it is "Beauty," which leans toward those that chase a feel good time, or "Bands," which means it's only supposed to be used for key situations, he can't make up his mind.
The novel relates the adventures of Bill, a 13-year-old boy, and his magic walking stick that has the power to take him and whoever he is holding by the hand to any desired place, from "the blinding white sands of the Solomon Islands ... [to] the rowans and birches of a wintry Highland Glen”. He visits the elephant's graveyard, plays a prank on some selfish neighbours and helps a beleaguered young prince in a Balkan kingdom. After hearing an old legend, Bill comes to believe the stick is one of the two staves mentioned in the Book of Zechariah 11:7, but whether it is "Beauty", which favours the pursuit of pleasure, or "Bands", which should be used only for serious purposes, he cannot decide.
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Dick Lydecker and I had a conversation today (Monday, Oct. 22) with Noel Watson, the Chairman and CEO of Jacobs, concerning interest in NEPCO. Noel had been out of the office most of last week due to the death of his mother in law. We discussed the potential of Jacobs acquiring NEPCO over a period of time. Noel listened, but it was difficult to determine his interest. We outlined a program where Jacobs, after a confidentiality agreement is in place, would send a couple of people to meet with Dick and I for a one day summary review of NEPCO. If there is interest from that review, then we would proceed to a management introduction and due diligence. Noel stated he would keep our approach in confidence, but needed to review the opportunity with a couple of people and would get back to us next Monday, Oct. 29. From past experience, I know Joe Jacobs, the founder, will be involved in any acquisition decision and I am sure that is the focus of Noel's review. I am sure Noel will also test his sources on NEPCO. In a side note, Jacobs shares have been doing very well as of late and are almost back to their historic high. Keith Dodson
Dick Lydecker and I conversed today with Noel Watson, the Chairman and CEO of Jacobs, concerning their interest in NEPCO. Noel was absent from the office most of last week due to the untimely demise of his mother in law. Nonetheless, we were able to thoroughly discuss the possibility of Jacobs acquiring NEPCO over a period of time. Noel actively listened and engaged with us in this discussion, but not in a manner which would allow us to easily determine his interest in the notion. Lydecker and I outlined a course of action in which Jacobs (after signing a confidentiality agreement), would send over a couple of representatives to meet with Lydecker and myself to review NEPCO. If that review went well, then we would proceed to an introduction of management and due diligence. Noel assured us that he would keep our offer confidential, but stated that he needed to discuss the opportunity with some of his people before giving us an official answer on next Monday, the 29th of October. From past experiences I can state with confidence that Joe Jacobs, the company's founder, will be deeply involved in any discussions of acquisitions on their end. It is for this reason that I am confident that Joe's opinion will be the primary focus of Noel's review. I am also quite confident that Noel will use this as an opportunity to test his sources on NEPCO. As a brief addendum, it should be noted that Jacobs has been doing quite well recently, and have nearly matched their historic high water mark. Regards, Keith Dodson
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I am coming in this weekend to box up for the big move........ Please go through the large black file cabinet and the beige and purge, anything you don't want. There will be dumpsters along the floor tomorrow afternoon. I have your move packets and I will issue them later next week. There is a 6 Box MAXIMUM...... If you have more than that, the movers will only move 6 boxes. There will be 2 sets of drawers. If you have any other questions, please ask me.
I will be returning to the area this weekend to prepare everything for the long journey. I would like to request that you search through the black and beige filing cabinets and purge anything you have no desire to keep. There will be dumpsters available across the floor tomorrow to aid you in this endeavor. I am currently in possession of your move packets and intend on issuing them out later next week. You should also be aware that you can only fill a maximum of six boxes with things to save, the movers will refuse to handle anything beyond that. Additionally, you should be aware of how many sets of drawers you will have to sift through, which is two. Please do not hesitate to contact me if you have any other queries.
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There is an amendment to the TVA Interconnection Agreement in the due diligence files that is not signed by TVA. Was one ever signed? Please advise ASAP. Zisman
In the due diligence files, there is an amendment to the TVA Interconnection Agreement that is not signed by TVA. Now, there is doubt if one was ever signed. This a request for immediate assistance. From Zisman
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Congress--(1) is against the UN People Liberties Board solution of March 24, 2016, which pushes for countries to compel their own firms to dispossess, or break agreements with, Israel, and asks for the making of a ``blacklist'' of firms that either function, or have business connections with companies that function passed Israel's 1949 truce lines, counting East Jerusalem;(2) sees such rules as reasons to stop spending, dispossess, or penalize Israel; and(3) to oppose the causes of reasons to stop spending, dispossess from, or penalize Israel, uplifts full application of the US-Israel Planned Cooperation Law of 2014 (People’s Law 113-296; 128 Stat. 4075) through better, governmentwide, arranged US-Israel mathematical and mechanical cooperation in private places like with regard to power, water, faming, different fuel tech, private space tech, and safety.
Congress--(1) opposes the United Nations Human Rights Council resolution of March 24, 2016, which urges countries to pressure their own companies to divest from, or break contracts with, Israel, and calls for the creation of a ``blacklist'' of companies that either operate, or have business relations with entities that operate, beyond Israel's 1949 Armistice lines, including East Jerusalem;(2) views such policies as actions to boycott, divest from, or sanction Israel; and(3) in order to counter the effects of actions to boycott, divest from, or sanction Israel, encourages full implementation of the United States-Israel Strategic Partnership Act of 2014 (Public Law 113-296; 128 Stat. 4075) through enhanced, governmentwide, coordinated United States-Israel scientific and technological cooperation in civilian areas such as with respect to energy, water, agriculture, alternative fuel technology, civilian space technology, and security.
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A great editorial in the Wall Street Journal today. Manager's Journal: What Enron Did Right By Samuel Bodily and Robert Bruner 11/19/2001 The Wall Street Journal A20 (Copyright (c) 2001, Dow Jones & Company, Inc.) This is a rough era for American business icons. Subject to the vagaries of age (Jack Welch), product failure (Ford/Firestone tires), competition (Lucent, AT&T), technology (Hewlett-Packard and Compaq), and dot-bomb bubbles (CMGI), managers and their firms remind us that being an icon is risky business. The latest example is Enron, whose fall from grace has resulted in a proposed fire sale to Dynegy. Once considered one of the country's most innovative companies, Enron became a pariah due to lack of transparency about its deals and the odor of conflicts of interest. The journalistic accounts of Enron's struggles drip with schadenfreude, hinting that its innovations and achievements were all a mirage. We hold no brief regarding the legal or ethical issues under investigation. We agree that more transparency about potential conflicts of interest is needed. High profitability does not justify breaking the law or ethical norms. But no matter how the current issues resolve themselves or what fresh revelations emerge, Enron has created an enormous legacy of good ideas that have enduring value.
A beautiful article in the Wall Street Journal on this day. Administrator’s Chronicle: What Enron Did Proper By Samuel Bodily and Robert Bruner 11/19/2001 The Wall Street Journal A20 (Copyright (c) 2001, Dow Jones & Corporation, Incorporated) This is a difficult period for National corporation images. Accountable for the vagaries of maturity (Jack Welch), merchandise loss (Ford/Firestone tires), corporation rival (Lucent, AT&T), machinery (Hewlett-Packard and Compaq), and dot-bomb bubbles (CMGI), administrators and their corporations emphasize to us that being well known publicly is a volatile matter. The freshest empirical evidence is Enron, whose decline in favor has developed in a projected fire sale to Dynegy. Once thought of as one of the nation’s most technologically advanced corporations, Enron transitioned to an outcast due to an absence of pellucidity about its deals and the odor of disputes at hand. The empirical description of Enron's grapplings drizzles with epicaricacy, alluring that its technological achievements were all an optical illusion. We have not yet been informed concerning the legitimate or behavioral problems under examination. We confer that more pellucidity about prospective disputes at hand is required. High lucrativeness does not account for legally infringing or principled conventions. But no matter how the present problems finalize themselves or what different epiphanies emerge, Enron has established an enormous chronicle of fine opinions that have enduring rates.
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“Citizen Minister: The citizen Robert Smith, my buddy, wants to get a passport so that he can go to Hamburg, and I’ll owe you one if you do him that favor. He and his family have lived in France for a few years because he doesn’t like England’s weather or government. He’s got a lot of property in France, but his banker won’t send him any money, so he’s gotta go to Hamburg because he can get his money back from the banker there, which he can’t do in France. His family’s still in France. --Salut et fraternite.”
"Citizen Minister: The citizen Robert Smith, a very particular friend of mine, wishes to obtain a passport to go to Hamburg, and I will be obliged to you to do him that favor. Himself and family have lived several years in France, for he likes neither the government nor the climate of England. He has large property in England, but his Banker in that country has refused sending him remittances. This makes it necessary for him to go to Hamburg, because from there he can draw his money out of his Banker's hands, which he cannot do whilst in France. His family remains in France.--Salut et fraternite.
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The maker of some recent labor reforms is the Labor Market Regulatory Authority (LMRA), which is separate from/considered more forward-looking than the Ministry of Labor/Social Development. The LMRA has helped dismantle the "sponsorship system" that stopped workers from changing jobs, and has helped institute requirements that every expatriate worker must be provided w/ health insurance. The LMRA has also instituted public awareness efforts vs. trafficking in person and has set up a publicly funded "labor fund" to upgrade worker skill levels. Still, the slow wage payments led to 100s of expat workers to protest several times during the year. After talks by the Ministry of Labor, all back wages were paid by end of 2018, according to the State Dept.
The architect of some recent labor reforms is the Labor Market Regulatory Authority (LMRA), which is separate from and considered more forward looking than the Ministry of Labor and Social Development. The LMRA has made strides to dismantle the "sponsorship system" that prohibited workers from changing jobs, and has helped institute requirements that every expatriate worker must be provided with health insurance. The LMRA has also instituted public awareness campaigns against trafficking in persons and has established a publicly funded "labor fund" to upgrade worker skill levels. Still, the slow payment of wages led hundreds of expatriate workers to protest on several occasions during the year. After mediation by the Ministry of Labor, all back wages were paid by the end of 2018, according to the State Department.
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Pakistan is the neighbor that’s most important to Afghanistan’s security, but they’ve played a mostly negative role in Afghan affairs for years and years. Experts and officials go back and forth over Pakistan’s commitment to Afghan stability in spite of its attempts to have control over events in Afghanistan through ties to insurgent groups. DOD reports on Afghanistan’s stability point out Afghan militant safe havens in Pakistan as a key threat to Afghan stability over and over.
The neighbor that is considered most crucial to Afghanistan's security is Pakistan, which has played an active and, by many accounts, negative role in Afghan affairs for decades. Experts and officials debate the extent of Pakistan's commitment to Afghan stability in light of its attempts to exert control over events in Afghanistan through ties to insurgent groups. DOD reports on Afghanistan's stability repeatedly have identified Afghan militant safe havens in Pakistan as a key threat to Afghan stability.
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Right after the storm, ESG set out on a major initiative to locate all employees and help them back on the job ASAP after they took time to make sure their families and homes were safe. Together with friends, partners, and customers in the sea community, ESG organized meals and goods to be handed out every day. They also set up an interest-free deferred payback loan program for employees in need while also organizing GoFundMes to help those most in need after the storm. ESG also knew temp housing was needed in the short term and at once built a tiny community located on greenfield space close to its facilities for workers w/ temp housing needs.
Immediately following the storm, ESG set out on an aggressive initiative to locate all of its employees and help get them back on the job as soon as practical after they took necessary time to secure the safety and security of their family and home. Together with its network of friends, partners, and customers in the maritime community, ESG organized daily distribution of meals and goods to employees in need. Additionally, ESG created an interest free deferred payback loan program for those employees in need and has organized Go Fund Me account to help those employees hardest hit by the storm. ESG also knew temporary housing was going to be a necessity in the short term and immediately built a small community located on greenfield space near its facilities for those employees with temporary housing needs.
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So subsection (a) of section 1712A of title 38 of the US Code is changed. It says that on a veteran's request, the Secretary shall provide counseling to help the veteran adjust to civilian life within the limits of Department facilities. This counseling includes a general mental and psychological check to see if the veteran has any mental or psychological problems related to readjustment. Subsection (c) is being canceled, and a new subsection (c) is being added. Based on this new subsection, the Secretary can give the counseling services described in section 1701(6)(B)(ii) of this title to the surviving parents, spouse, and children of any Armed Forces person who dies on active duty from a condition incurred or aggravated by their service. Subsection (e) is also being changed to let the Secretary contract counseling services under subsections (a), (b), and (c) of this section.
(a) Readjustment Counseling.--(1) Subsection (a) of section 1712A of title 38, United States Code, is amended to read as follows:``(a) Upon the request of any veteran, the Secretary shall, within the limits of Department facilities, furnish counseling to such veteran to assist such veteran in readjusting to civilian life. Such counseling shall include a general mental and psychological assessment to ascertain whether such veteran has mental or psychological problems associated with readjustment to civilian life.''.(2) Subsection (c) of such section is repealed.(b) Other Counseling.--Such section is further amended by inserting after subsection (b) the following new subsection (c):``(c) The Secretary may provide the counseling services described in section 1701(6)(B)(ii) of this title to the surviving parents, spouse, and children of any member of the Armed Forces who dies while serving on active duty or from a condition (as determined by the Secretary) incurred in or aggravated by such service.''.(c) Authority To Contract for Counseling Services.--Subsection (e) of such section is amended by striking out ``subsections (a) and (b)'' each place it appears and inserting in lieu thereof ``subsections (a), (b), and (c)''.
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The U.S. and Liberia have kept a very diplomatic relations for over a 150 years. These close ties made it through the 20th century and is rooted in the U.S. investment in the rubber sector and strong political, development, and defense cooperation during the Cold War, but it got a little rocky when Liberia went through 2 civil wars in 1989-1997 and 1999-2003. The U.S. gave a tone of humanitarian aid in during those conflicts and helped bring an end to each war, and the U.S military had a task force deployed for a very short time to act as peacekeepers and help give out aid after the conflict. U.S.-Liberia ties got a lot better during the tenure of former President Ellen Johnson Sirleaf, who was in office from 2006-2018, and have stayed close under current President George Weah, who was inaugurated in 2018.
The United States and Liberia have maintained diplomatic relations for more than 150 years. Close ties endured in the 20th century—underpinned by U.S. investment in the rubber sector and robust political, development, and defense cooperation during the Cold War—but they came under strain during Liberia's two civil wars (1989-1997 and 1999-2003). The United States provided substantial humanitarian assistance in response to those conflicts and helped mediate an end to each war, and the U.S. military briefly deployed a task force to assist peacekeepers and support aid delivery after the conflict. U.S.-Liberia ties improved considerably during the tenure of former President Ellen Johnson Sirleaf (in office 2006-2018) and have remained close under current President George Weah (inaugurated in 2018).
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The door was locked when Don Carlo got there, but there was a little candlelight coming from inside the cabin, and he could hear the prisoners, S.S. Simon, Sundown Hill, and Brindle Bill, whispering to another as they plotted against him. So he snuck up on the roof and silently slid down chimney to peak out of the bottom. There were four dudes sitting around the table in front of him, and between them there was pile of silver coins glittering in the candlelight.
When Don Carlo arrived at headquarters, the door and window was fastened on the inside, a faint light from a tallow candle, that glimmered through the cracks of the cabin, whispered the deep laid scheme of the inmates--S. S. Simon, Sundown Hill and Brindle Bill were banded together to swindle Dan Carlo. Don Carlo went there to enter that cabin. Quick as thought he clambered up the corner of the jutting logs, and passed down the chimney. In front of him, around a square table, sat four men. On the center of the table a large pile of shining silver dollars, enlivened the light of the tallow candle.
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A recently published, highly extrapolatable semiempirical shell model mass equation is shown to well describe the energies of several apparently well-ID'd @xmath0-decay chains with known end product nuclei seen in superheavy elements research. This equation is also applied to the interpretation problem of some recent hot fusion-evaporation experiments w/ unknown end products and many conceivable reaction channels. Some likely interpretations are indicated. The racah institute of physics, the hebrew university of jerusalem, jerusalem 91904, israel pacs numbers: 21.10.dr, 21.60.cs, 27.90.+b
A recently published highly extrapolatable semiempirical shell model mass equation is shown to describe rather well the energies of several seemingly well identified @xmath0-decay chains with known end product nuclei observed in superheavy elements research. The equation is also applied to the interpretation problem of some recent hot fusion - evaporation experiments with unknown end products and several conceivable reaction channels. Some plausible interpretations are indicated. _ the racah institute of physics, the hebrew university of jerusalem, _ _ jerusalem 91904, israel _ pacs numbers: 21.10.dr, 21.60.cs, 27.90.+b
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While Sonny is flying another mission, Danny and Tumbler are freed by the Englishwoman, an MI5 agent looking into Arabian Airways. The 3 look for asylum at Emir Hussein's palace. He controls the region yet you find out he is linked with Bronstein. The illegal arms were meant to help him take back oil-rich lands from rival Sheikh Chekri El-Maahdi (Buck and Tumb realize this is the father of the princess they saved in Port Said). Despite this, they escape and go back to company HQ disguised as their captors. There, they get in touch with Sonny as he comes back from his mission. Sonny knocks out his copilot and sets a meeting with them on a base runway. He picks them up and flies off chased by bullets. The aircraft is hit and crash-lands a few miles out with base personnel close behind. In the desert, the 4 escapees almost die of thirst while hiding out. They are seen by a British recon plane, which sends help. The Arabian Airways bad guys chasing are arrested, but when the Brits arrive at company HQ they find it empty and exploded. The planes and weapons have left, and Emir Hussein is nowhere to be seen.
While Sonny is flying another mission, Danny and Tumbler are freed by the Englishwoman, who turns out to be an MI5 agent investigating the Arabian Airways. The three of them seek asylum at the palace of Emir Hussein, who controls the region, but he is revealed to be in cahoots with Bronstein; the illegal arms were meant to help him retake oil-rich territories from his rival, Sheikh Chekri El-Maahdi (whom Buck and Tumb recognize as the father of the princess they saved in Port Said). Despite this, they manage to stage another escape and return to the company headquarters disguised as their captors; there, they get into contact with Sonny as he returns from his mission. After knocking out his copilot, Sonny sets a rendez-vous with them on a base runway, where he picks them up and takes off again in a hail of bullets. Unfortunately, the aircraft is hit and crash-lands a few miles out, with the base personnel in hot pursuit. In the desert, the four escapees nearly die of thirst while evading their pursuers. However, they are spotted by a British reconnaissance aircraft, which quickly directs help to their position. The Arabian Airways thugs pursuing them are arrested, but when the British arrive at the company headquarters, they find it abandoned and dynamited; the planes and arms have left for another location, and Emir Hussein is also nowhere to be found.
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Hydrogen adatoms are one of the most exciting schemes for the functionalization of graphene. Hydrogen causes tapering resonances close to the dirac energy, making magnetic moments. Also, they're going to make local lattice curved that boost the spin-orbit pairing. This combo of magnetism and spin-orbit pairing gives way for a lot of different phases, and some these even have minor topological traits. We're going to look at how magnetism and spin-orbit work with each other for pairing in direct formation of hydrogen on graphene single layers, and it's grouped into the diff phases that could happen. We're going to branch our model out to think about the formations of adsorbates in graphene-like crystals with powerful inherent spin-orbit pairings.
Hydrogen adatoms are one of the most the promising proposals for the functionalization of graphene. Hydrogen induces narrow resonances near the dirac energy, which lead to the formation of magnetic moments. Furthermore, they also create local lattice distortions which enhance the spin - orbit coupling. The combination of magnetism and spin - orbit coupling allows for a rich variety of phases, some of which have non trivial topological features. We analyze the interplay between magnetism and spin - orbit coupling in ordered arrays of hydrogen on graphene monolayers, and classify the different phases that may arise. We extend our model to consider arrays of adsorbates in graphene - like crystals with stronger intrinsic spin - orbit couplings.
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I want to remind each of you to attend the Enron Employee Meeting tomorrow at 10 a.m. in the Hyatt Regency Imperial Ballroom. I hope to introduce many of you at the meeting, so please plan to sit up front. Seats will be held for you. This will be a very important meeting. I look forward to seeing you there. Regards,
This is a gentle reminder for you to attend the Enron Employee Meeting tomorrow at 10 am in the Hyatt Regency Imperial Ballroom. Please make arrangements to sit in the front, as I expect to introduce many of you there. Your reserved seats will be retained. This meeting will be of utmost significance. I am looking forward to seeing you there. With regards.
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And like everything else, Port William changed. Brother Demitt left, on foot and full of whiskey, one cold December night. The path led him through a field fenced from the suburbs of the village. The old man couldn't mount the fence, and sat down to rest with his back against it. Here it's thought he fell into a deep sleep. The cold north wind wafted away the spirit of the old man, and his neighbors found him frozen and dead the next morning.
And like everything else, Port William changed. Brother Demitt left Port William, on foot and full of whisky, one cold evening in December. The path led him across a field fenced from the suburbs of the village. The old man being unable to mount the fence, sat down to rest with his back against the fence--here it is supposed he fell into a stupid sleep. The cold north wind--that never ceases to blow because some of Earth's poor children are intoxicated--wafted away the spirit of the old man, and his neighbors, the next morning, found the old man sitting against the fence, frozen, cold and dead.
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Section 21102, that’s redefined by section 2 of this Act, of chapter 211 of title 49, U.S. Code, is changed—(1) in paragraph (5), by putting in “and yardmaster employee” before the period; and (2) by adding at the end of this: (6) “yardmaster employee” talks about an employee that supervises and coordinates the actions of workers working in railroad traffic operations, plus making up or breaking up trains and switching inbound or outbound traffic.
Section 21102 (as so redesignated by section 2 of this Act) of chapter 211 of title 49, United States Code, is amended--(1) in paragraph (5), by inserting ``and yardmaster employee'' before the period; and(2) by adding at the end the following:``(6) `yardmaster employee' means an employee who supervises and coordinates the activities of workers engaged in railroad traffic operations, including making up or breaking up trains and switching inbound or outbound traffic.''.
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So, old law would allow taxpayers to get a personal exclusion for themselves and every member of the family. Plus a kid credit was okayed for kids under 17. The kid credit was, and still is, kind of refundable, so that taxpayers with no tax liability can get some if not all of the kid credit as a refund more than the taxed owed. The refundable part of the credit went as far as 15% of earned income that's over $3,000. The refundable part of the kid credit is sometimes called additional child tax credit or ACTC. The lowest income taxpayers usually get all of the kid credit by the ACTC. Now, personal exclusion and kid credits were made slowly shut down under the old law. Personal exclusion were recorded for inflation, but the kid credit wasn't.
Under prior law, taxpayers could claim a personal exemption for themselves and each family member. In addition, a child credit was allowed for children under the age of 17. The child credit was (and still is) partially refundable, so that taxpayers with no tax liability can receive some or all of the child credit as a refund greater than taxes owed. The refundable portion of the credit was limited to 15% of earned income in excess of $3,000. (The refundable portion of the child credit is sometimes referred to as the additional child tax credit or ACTC. The lowest-income taxpayers generally receive all of the child credit in the form of the ACTC.) Personal exemptions and child credits were phased out under prior law. Personal exemptions were indexed for inflation, but the child credit was not.
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The figure below illustrates the status of the Administration's border security factsheet plan as of September 2019. Of the $6.7 billion in newly introduced funds, approx. $2.1 billion has been obligated (or made available for obligation). For completeness, the figure includes $1.375 billion in FY2019 DHS appropriations that were included in the President's Border Security factsheet announcement. However, these funds were previously enacted and do not represent a plan for future actions.
The figure below illustrates the status of the Administration's border security factsheet plan as of September 2019. Of the $6.7 billion in newly introduced funds, approximately $2.1 billion has been obligated (or otherwise made available for obligation). For completeness, the figure also includes $1.375 billion in FY2019 DHS appropriations that were included in the President's Border security factsheet announcement, though these funds were previously enacted and do not represent a plan for future actions.
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As in every bargain, the person(s) must balance making duties to promote trade with the relevant person(s) dominance. Keeping the ability to compromise and rule space may be very pertinent for those supporters still figuring out their domestic online schedule. Thinkers predict that the plurilateral delegates will have to choose between scale and involvement. A thin consensus with marginal scale and resources, like those aimed at e-commerce backing, would likely keep the biggest amount of bargaining attendees but could have less effect. Coming from a different angle, a high-standard overall consensus with bigger obligations, like that between the US and Japan, may put off attendees who don’t want to or aren’t able to take on all the duties. Viable plans are these.
As in every negotiation, the parties must balance creating obligations to facilitate trade with respecting parties' sovereignty. Maintaining sufficient flexibility and policy space may be especially important for those members still determining their domestic digital agenda. Analysts expect that the plurilateral negotiators will have to decide between scope and inclusion. A narrow agreement with limited scope and provisions, such as those focused on e-commerce facilitation, would likely retain the greatest number of negotiating participants but could have less impact. On the other hand, a high-standard broad agreement with deeper commitments, such as that between the United States and Japan, may deter participants who are not yet willing or able to accept all the obligations. Possible approaches include the following.
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Stephen stood on top of the hill and looked West. Some clouds were gathering in the sky, but it was still sunny out. Halfway up the hill, two blue lines of soldiers had marched, sun glinting off their rifles and the cannons trailing behind. Led by a very smart and capable General, the army was closing in on Camp Jackson.
Stephen stopped at the crest of the hill, in the white dust of the new-turned street, to gaze westward. Clouds were gathering in the sky, but the sun still shone brightly, Half way up the rise two blue lines had crawled, followed by black splotches, and at the southwest was the glint of the sun on rifle barrels. Directed by a genius in the art of war, the regiments were closing about Camp Jackson.
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(a) In General.--The following regulations and guides shall have no force or effect: (1) The last rule of the Corps of Engineers titled "Final Rule for Reg. Programs of the Corps of Engineers" (51 Fed. Reg. 41206 (November 13, 1986)). (2) The proposed rule of the EPA titled "Advance Notice of Proposed Rulemaking on the Clean Water Act Reg. Definition of 'Waters of the US'" (68 Fed. Reg. 1991 (January 15, 2003)). (3) The guidance doc entitled "Clean Water Act Jurisdiction Following the U.S. Supreme Court's Decision in 'Rapanos v. United States' & Carabell v. United States'" (December 2, 2008) (relating to the def. of waters under the jurisdiction of the Fed Water Pollution Control Act (33 U.S.C. 1251 et seq.)). (4) Any following reg of or guidance given by any Fed agency defining/interpreting the term "navigable waters" or "waters of the US." (b) Prohibition.-- The Sec. of the Army, acting thru the Chief of Engineers, and the Admin of the EPA shall not make known any rules/issue any guides that expands/interprets the def of navigable waters expressly authorized by Congress.
(a) In General.--The following regulations and guidance shall have no force or effect:(1) The final rule of the Corps of Engineers entitled ``Final Rule for Regulatory Programs of the Corps of Engineers'' (51 Fed. Reg. 41206 (November 13, 1986)).(2) The proposed rule of the Environmental Protection Agency entitled ``Advance Notice of Proposed Rulemaking on the Clean Water Act Regulatory Definition of `Waters of the United States''' (68 Fed. Reg. 1991 (January 15, 2003)).(3) The guidance document entitled ``Clean Water Act Jurisdiction Following the U.S. Supreme Court's Decision in `Rapanos v. United States' & `Carabell v. United States''' (December 2, 2008) (relating to the definition of waters under the jurisdiction of the Federal Water Pollution Control Act (33 U.S.C. 1251 et seq.)).(4) Any subsequent regulation of or guidance issued by any Federal agency that defines or interprets the term ``navigable waters'' or ``waters of the United States''.(b) Prohibition.--The Secretary of the Army, acting through the Chief of Engineers, and the Administrator of the Environmental Protection Agency shall not promulgate any rules or issue any guidance that expands or interprets the definition of navigable waters unless expressly authorized by Congress.
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Under START, the elimination process for launchers for road-mobile ICBMs needed the "erector-launcher mech and leveling supports shall be removed from the launcher chassis" and "the framework of the erector-launcher mech on which the ICBM is mounted/erected shall be cut at places that aren't assembly joints into 2 pieces of approx. equal size." It also required the missile launch support stuff be taken from the launcher chassis, and the "mountings of the erector-launcher mech and of the launcher leveling supports shall be cut off the chassis" and cut into 2 pieces of approx. equal length. START also required 0.78 meters of the chassis be cut off and cut into 2 parts, so the chassis would be too short to support mobile ICBMs.
Under START, the elimination process for launchers for road-mobile ICBMs required that "the erector-launcher mechanism and leveling supports shall be removed from the launcher chassis" and that "the framework of the erector-launcher mechanism on which the ICBM is mounted and erected shall be cut at locations that are not assembly joints into two pieces of approximately equal size." It also required that the missile launch support equipment be removed from the launcher chassis, and that the "mountings of the erector-launcher mechanism and of the launcher leveling supports shall be cut off the launcher chassis" and cut into two pieces of approximately equal size. START also required that 0.78 meters of the launcher chassis be cut off and cut into two parts, so that the chassis would be too short to support mobile ICBMs.
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Most jobs have internal rules and codes that people must follow to keep their professions clear of corruption and villainy. These rules not only protect clients, but they also help the folks working in these jobs. Rules like these allow the profession as a whole to censure its members when they're acting wrongly, and this helps keep the playing field level for the professionals who always play by the rules. These rules also help customers keep their trust in these professions, which in turn encourages them to buy more of the profession's services.
Most professionals have internally enforced codes of practice that members of the profession must follow to prevent exploitation of the client and to preserve the integrity of the profession. This is not only for the benefit of the client but also for the benefit of those belonging to that profession. Disciplinary codes allow the profession to define a standard of conduct and ensure that individual practitioners meet this standard, by disciplining them from the professional body if they do not practice accordingly. This allows those professionals who act with a conscience to practice in the knowledge that they will not be undermined commercially by those who have fewer ethical qualms. It also maintains the public’s trust in the profession, encouraging the public to continue seeking their services.
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Estimates of speeds from time series of photospheric and/or chromospheric vector magnetograms can be used to figure out fluxes of magnetic energy (poynting flux) and helicity across the magnetogram layer, and to provide time-dependent boundary settings for data-driven simulations of solar atmosphere on top of this layer. Speed components perpendicular to this field are needed both to figure out transport rates and to determine model boundary settings. We discuss some approaches to estimating perpendicular flows from magnetograms. Since doppler shifts have input from flows parallel to the magnetic field, perpendicular speeds aren't generally recoverable from just doppler shifts. The induction equation s vertical component relates evolution in @xmath0 to the perpendicular flow field, but has a finite null space (meaning some "null" flows like motions along normal field shapes, don't affect @xmath0.) Because of this, added info is needed to correctly ID the perpendicular flow field. Tracking methods, which track @xmath1 in a neighborhood, have a long heritage, but other methods have recently been put to use. In a recent paper, many techniques were tested using synthetic magnetograms from mhd sims. Here, we use the same test data to ID: 1) the ability of the induction equation s normal component, by itself, to estimate flows; and 2) a tracking method s ability to recover flow components perpendicular to @xmath2 and parallel to shapes of @xmath0. This work has been backed by NASA heliophysics theory grant nng05g144 g.
Estimates of velocities from time series of photospheric and/or chromospheric vector magnetograms can be used to determine fluxes of magnetic energy ( the poynting flux ) and helicity across the magnetogram layer, and to provide time - dependent boundary conditions for data - driven simulations of the solar atmosphere above this layer. Velocity components perpendicular to the magnetic field are necessary both to compute these transport rates and to derive model boundary conditions. Here, we discuss some possible approaches to estimating perpendicular flows from magnetograms. Since doppler shifts contain contributions from flows parallel to the magnetic field, perpendicular velocities are not generally recoverable from doppler shifts alone. The induction equation s vertical component relates evolution in @xmath0 to the perpendicular flow field, but has a finite null space, meaning some `` null'' flows, e.g., motions along contours of normal field, do not affect @xmath0. Consequently, additional information is required to accurately specify the perpendicular flow field. Tracking methods, which analyze @xmath1 in a neighborhood, have a long heritage, but other approaches have recently been developed. In a recent paper, several such techniques were tested using synthetic magnetograms from mhd simulations. Here, we use the same test data to characterize: 1 ) the ability of the induction equation s normal component, by itself, to estimate flows; and 2 ) a tracking method s ability to recover flow components that are perpendicular to @xmath2 and parallel to contours of @xmath0. This work has been supported by nasa heliophysics theory grant nng05g144 g.
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Kicking off with the first partisan battalion being made near Sisak, Croatia on June 22nd and revolting in Serbia in July 1941, resistance to the occupying armies in Yugoslavia went on and on until the war wrapped up. From the get go both Partisans and the Chetniks showed resistance, the Partisans became the main resistance force after Chetniks started to team-up with the Axis forces in 1942, especially in Operation Trio.
Beginning with the forming of the first partisan battalion near Sisak, Croatia on 22 June and uprising in Serbia in July 1941, there was continuous resistance to the occupying armies in Yugoslavia until the end of the war. While in the beginning both Partisans and the Chetniks engaged in resistance, the Partisans became the main resistance force after Chetniks started to collaborate with the Axis forces in 1942, especially in Operation Trio.
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"Listen to me," he said finally, still holding her hand. "I may not want you to do anything now. Think about it. You belong to me. You say you care for me. You told me this morning. Now why should you stand out against me? I like you and can provide for you. Why can't we be friends? We'll talk about this later."
"Listen to me," he said finally, still holding her hand. "I may not want you to do anything immediately. I want you to think it over. But you belong to me. You say you care for me. You admitted that this morning. I know you do. Now why should you stand out against me? I like you, and I can do a lot of things for you. Why not let us be good friends now? Then we can talk the rest of this over later."
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Since Aug 2018, officials in Beijing have tried to pipe down student labor activist at Peking Uni in Beijing, one of the country's most high class institutions of higher ed. At least 21 members of the university's Marxist Society have been put under house arrest or have vanished, and a lot of other ones have been questioned or watched. Though the students aren't trying to put in a Western style democracy, the CCP seems to worry that the movement could help workers to solo organize and put on protests at a moment when labor out bursts are spreading across the county, or spark other kinds of social activism. The gov seems very touchy on student movements beginning in China's most elite uni that typically fosters political activism.
Since August 2018, authorities in Beijing have attempted to silence student labor activists at Peking University in Beijing, one of the country's most prestigious institutions of higher learning. At least 21 members of the university's Marxist Society have been placed under house arrest or have disappeared, and many others have been interrogated or surveilled. Although the students are not agitating for Western-style democracy, the CCP appears to fear that the movement could help workers to independently organize and stage protests at a time when labor demonstrations are rising across the country, or ignite other forms of social activism. The government appears particularly sensitive to student movements originating in China's most elite university, a traditional incubator of political activism.
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The state with the placement and duty for a kid in foster care is to give the voucher to that kid. The state must also keep giving a voucher to any kid who is still getting one and moves to another state because of going to a school of higher education. If a kid moves permanently to another state after leaving care and then enrolls in a qualified school of higher education, the state where they live would give the voucher.
The state with the placement and responsibility for a youth in foster care is to provide the voucher to that youth. The state must also continue to provide a voucher to any youth who is currently receiving one and moves to another state for the sole purpose of attending an institution of higher education. If a youth moves permanently to another state after leaving care and subsequently enrolls in a qualified institution of higher education, the state where he or she resides would provide the voucher.
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I have spoke to Jeff Harbert about the use of "Fallback Reference Price" in the confirms and the need for an additional provision addressing "Postponement" (which will override our defintion of Postponement in the Master Agreement). Please take note of this in preparing new confirms. I have appropriate language. Please call if you have any questions. Sara
Jeff Harbert and I have discussed the application of “Fallback Reference Price” in the confirms, as well as the requirement for an additional preparation confronting “Postponement” (which disallows our interpretation of Postponement within the Master Agreement).Please ledger this when constructing new affirmatives. I possess suitable vernacular. Please contact me if you find any inquiries. Sara
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We study bond-order parameters for generalized @xmath0-@xmath1 models on a square lattice. Using the plane-wave limit the considered order parameters make up basic functions for irreducible reps of the symmetry transformations of the point group and time reversal. We show for instability wave vectors along the diagonals all possible basic functions are fine-tuned (obey restriction beyond symmetry requirements) or break time reversal symmetry, describing flux states. For instability wave vectors along the crystal axes, related to the seen case in underdoped cuprates, there are only 3 reps with @xmath2, @xmath3, and @xmath4 symmetry which don't break time reversal symmetry in the general case. We suggest that 1 of them has recently been seen in resonant electric X-ray scattering.
We study bond - order parameters for generalized @xmath0-@xmath1 models on a square lattice. Using the plane - wave limit the considered order parameters form basis functions for irreducible representations of the symmetry transformations of the point group and of time reversal. We show that for instability wave vectors along the diagonals all possible basis functions are either fine - tuned ( i.e., obey restrictions beyond the requirements of symmetry ) or break time reversal symmetry and thus describe flux states. For instability wave vectors along the crystalline axes, corresponding to the observed case in underdoped cuprates, there are only three representations with @xmath2, @xmath3, and @xmath4 symmetry which do not break time reversal symmetry in the general case. We suggest that one of them has recently been observed in resonant elastic x - ray scattering.
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The UK is an important U.S. trade and economic partner (see Figure 3 ). The UK is also a top root of and place for foreign direct investment, and associate activity is notable. Currently, WTO terms control the U.S.-UK trade, and these terms still apply after Brexit unless the two sides ensure more favored access to each other's markets through the ending of a two-sided FTA. The UK can bargain, but not apply trade agreements with other countries during the transition period.
The UK is a major U.S. trade and economic partner (see Figure 3 ). The UK is also a leading source of and destination for foreign direct investment, and affiliate activity is significant. Presently, WTO terms govern U.S.-UK trade, and these terms continue to apply after Brexit unless the two sides secure more preferential access to each other's markets through the conclusion of a bilateral FTA. The UK can negotiate, but not implement, trade agreements with other countries during the transition period.
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Pisanu left his hometown soccer club, Cagliari Calcio, in February of 2001 to join Hellas Verona F.C. for 800 million lire ($438,437.30). He played on Verona's reserve team during the 2001-02 season until Verona finalized his transfer from Cagliari in June of '02. In January of '04 he went off to Varese and later that year he joined the Serie A club Parma F.C. alongside Alessandro Elia and Marco Fanna. He played with them for five and half years, averaging about 15 games a season. He didn't play at all during the 2009-2010 Serie A though, probably because he'd already won some clout for the club in '09 by coming in 2nd place in the 2008-2009 Serie B championship.
Pisanu joined Hellas Verona F.C. from hometown club Cagliari Calcio in February 2001 for 800 million lire (€413,166). He was a member of the reserve team during the 2001–02 season. In June 2002 Verona acquired Pisanu outright from Cagliari. In January 2004 Pisanu left for Varese. In mid-2004 Pisanu joined Serie A club Parma F.C. along with Alessandro Elia and Marco Fanna. During his 5½ years stay he played an average of 15 games per seasons. He failed to play any game during the 2009–10 Serie A after winning promotion for the club in 2009 as the runner-up of the 2008–09 Serie B.
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“Yeah,” she said, a want to do what he said took her over. She told herself afterwards that she should talk to him, that she should tell him that she’s decided not to see him anymore, and this was a good chance to do so. He left the house at 6:30 saying that he forgot he had to do something, and a little after 7:00 he was waiting for her in a closed carriage where they’d said they’d meet. He was cool and collected about what was going on and pretty happy on the inside, underneath a more serious surface. It’s like he breathed in some perfume, soft, grateful, entrancing.
"Yes," she said, a sense of compulsion to do his bidding seizing her. She explained to herself afterward that she ought to talk to him, that she must tell him finally of her decision not to see him again, and this was as good an opportunity as any. At half-past six he left the house on a pretext--a forgotten engagement--and a little after seven he was waiting for her in a closed carriage near the appointed spot. He was calm, absolutely satisfied as to the result, and curiously elated beneath a sturdy, shock-proof exterior. It was as if he breathed some fragrant perfume, soft, grateful, entrancing.
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Algorithms are very good at sifting through, looking over, and finding trends in big data amounts, and so possibly could be used in these peril gauging and consent tasks. Algorithms' upped smartness and the growth of machine learning and AI have drawn a lot of eyes in the fiscal field in using these technologies to robotize preil-control and consent taste. For instance, FINRA expects that these gizmos will help stop money laundering plans; monitoring inner firm workers that place exchanges for a firm; broker-dealer exchange application for buyers; making sure buyer data seclusion and stopping security perils; and concentrating managerial control methods for more peril control.
Algorithms are especially well suited to sifting through, analyzing, and identifying patterns in large data sets, and so potentially could be used in these risk assessment and compliance functions. Algorithms' increased sophistication and the development of machine learning and artificial intelligence have fueled strong interest in the financial industry in further using these technologies to automate risk-management and compliance functions. For example, FINRA predicts that such tools will help with anti-money laundering processes; surveilling internal firm employees involved in placing trades on a firm's behalf; broker-dealer trade execution for customers; ensuring customer data privacy and preventing security risks; and centralizing supervisory control systems for additional risk management.
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The private health insurance market consists of the group market (which includes employer-sponsored insurance) & the individual market (which includes plans directly purchased from an insurer). The group market is divided into small and large group market segments. A small group is basically defined as a group of up to 50 folks (like employees), while a large group has 51 or more people. Employers and other sponsors of group health plans may buy coverage from an insurer in the small and large group markets (i.e., they may totally insure). Sponsors can finance their own coverage (i.e., they may self-insure). Individual and small-group markets include plans offered on and off the individual and small-group health insurance exchanges, respectively.
The private health insurance market includes both the group market (largely made up of employer-sponsored insurance) and the individual market (which includes plans directly purchased from an insurer). The group market is divided into small- and large-group market segments; a small group is typically defined as a group of up to 50 individuals (e.g., employees), and a large group is typically defined as one with 51 or more individuals. Employers and other group health plan sponsors may purchase coverage from an insurer in the small- and large-group markets (i.e., they may fully insure ). Sponsors may instead finance coverage themselves (i.e., they may self-insure ). The individual and small-group markets include plans sold on and off the individual and small-group health insurance exchanges, respectively.
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There are some special rules about donations of certain property types. Not all of them appear here. Special rules give a bigger deduction for C corps. giving inventory to 501(c) (3) orgs. for the care of the ill, needy, or infants. There's an enhanced deduction for business giving food items. There are special rules linked with donations of cars, IP, and clothing/household stuff. Another special rule allows for tax-free handouts from individual retirement accounts (IRAs) for charity. The IRA handout rule is helpful to nonitemizers since it excludes handouts from income, equal to receiving the amount and making a charitable deduction.
There are a number of special rules related to donations of certain types of property, not all of which are discussed here. Special rules provide an enhanced deduction for C corporations contributing inventory to 501(c)(3) organizations for the care of the ill, the needy, or infants. There is also an enhanced deduction for businesses' contributions of food inventory. There are special rules associated with donations of vehicles, intellectual property, and clothing and household items. Another special provision allows for tax-free distributions from individual retirement accounts (IRAs) for charitable purposes. The IRA distribution provision is especially beneficial to nonitemizers because it excludes the distribution from income, which is equivalent to receiving the distribution and making a charitable deduction.
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This act is about certain terms with particular definitions. "Federal reclamation laws" stand for the Reclamation Act and any acts that amend or supplement it. "Regional rural water supply system" is a water supply system that supports many towns or communities in a rural area, including Indian reservations, where residents of each town or community aren't more than 40,000 folks. The "Secretary" means the Secretary of the Interior.
For purposes of this Act:(1) Federal reclamation laws.--The term ``Federal reclamation laws'' means the Reclamation Act and Acts amendatory thereof and supplementary thereto;(2) Regional rural water supply system.--The term ``regional rural water supply system'' means a water supply system that serves multiple towns or communities in a rural area (including Indian reservations) where such towns or communities have a population not exceeding 40,000 persons.(3) Secretary.--The term ``Secretary'' means the Secretary of the Interior.
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Russians have also questioned if the U.S. and Russia are in a place to extend New START before it ends in 2021. At a conference in Washington in March 2019, Anatoly Antonov, Russia's U.S. ambassador, noted Russia isn't interested in expanding New START so it would count new types of strategic systems and Russia wouldn't be willing to talk of an extension until the U.S. talks about Russia's issues w/ U.S. putting into use the treaty's conversion/elimination procedures. He also noted if the 2 sides made a new treaty to capture the systems of concern to the US, Russia would insist on addressing U.S systems (ballistic missile defenses, strategic conventional weapons) that concern Russia.
Russian officials have also questioned whether the United States and Russia are in a position to extend New START before it expires in 2021. At a conference in Washington in March 2019, Anatoly Antonov, Russia's ambassador to the United States, noted that Russia is not interested in expanding New START so that it would count new kinds of strategic systems and that Russia would be unwilling to discuss an extension of New START until the United States addresses Russia's concerns with U.S. implementation of the treaty's conversion and elimination procedures. Moreover, he noted that, if the two sides negotiated a new treaty to capture the systems of concern to the United States, Russia would insist on addressing U.S. systems—like ballistic missile defenses and strategic conventional weapons—that are of concern to Russia.
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The WTCHP statue doesn't really have any type of cancer in the list of WTC-related health conditions. Yet the statue does want the WTCHP official to everyone once and a while look at the available scientific evidence to see what type of cancer should be covered by the WTCHP and, by association, the VCF. Now, this is a reaction to a petition add terms to the list WTC-related health conditions, the WTCHP official is supposed to, in a 90 day time frame, to either ask a rec on action from the WTC Scientific/Technical Advisory Committee (STAC) or make a determination on adding the health condition. So if the WTCHP official asks a rec from the STAC, that rec must be made in a 90 day period of it being asked for and the WTCHP official must do something with it in another 90 day period.
The WTCHP statute does not include any type of cancer in the list of WTC-related health conditions. However, the statute does require the WTCHP administrator to periodically review the available scientific evidence to determine if any type of cancer should be covered by the WTCHP and, by extension, the VCF. In response to a petition to add conditions to the list of WTC-related health conditions, the WTCHP administrator is required, within 90 days, to either request a recommendation on action from the WTC Scientific/Technical Advisory Committee (STAC) or make a determination on adding the health condition. If the WTCHP administrator requests a recommendation from the STAC, that recommendation must be made within 90 days of its receipt and the WTCHP administrator must act on that request within an additional 90 days.
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Section 922 of title 18, US Code, is changed by putting in at the end: "(s)(1) Except as provided in para. (2), it shall be illegal for any person--"(A) to transfer an assault weapon after the 90-day period beginning with the effective date of this subsection." (2)(A)(i) Para.(1) shan't apply to a transfer to/by, or a poss. by/under the authority of, the US or any dept. or agency thereof, or any State/dept., agency, or political subdiv thereof." (B) Para (1) shan't apply to the otherwise lawful poss. of an assault weapon by a person who--" (i) has lawfully had the weapon since before the eff. date of this subsection; and "(ii) has submitted to the Sec, in such form/in such manner as the Sec. shall prescribe by reg.--"(I) the name (and any former name), address, DOB, and any driver's license # of the person; and "(II) the weapon's serial number." (3) W/in 90 days after the enactment of this subsection, the Sec. shall prescribe such regs. as are needed to carry out this subsection.".
Section 922 of title 18, United States Code, is amended by adding at the end the following:``(s)(1) Except as provided in paragraph (2), it shall be unlawful for any person--``(A) to transfer an assault weapon; or``(B) to possess an assault weapon after the 90-day period that begins with the effective date of this subsection.``(2)(A)(i) Paragraph (1) shall not apply to a transfer to or by, or a possession by or under the authority of, the United States or any department or agency thereof, or any State or a department, agency, or political subdivision thereof.``(B) Paragraph (1) shall not apply to the otherwise lawful possession of an assault weapon by a person who--``(i) has lawfully possessed the weapon since before the effective date of this subsection; and``(ii) has submitted to the Secretary, in such form and in such manner as the Secretary shall prescribe by regulation--``(I) the name (and any former name), address, date of birth, and any driver's license number of the person; and``(II) the serial number of the weapon.``(3) Within 90 days after the date of the enactment of this subsection, the Secretary shall prescribe such regulations as are necessary to carry out this subsection.''.
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Part 21103(c) (as so reassigned by part 2 of this Law) of chapter 211 of title 49, US Code is changed--(1) in paragraph (1)(A), by taking away “21109(b)'' and putting in “21110(b)'';(2) in paragraph (3), by taking away “21109(b)'' and putting in ‘21110(b)'';(3) by taking away subparagraph (C) of paragraph (4);(4) by reassigning subparagraph (D) of paragraph (4) as subparagraph (B); and(5) by taking away “new part21103'' each place it shows up and putting in “part 21104''.
Section 21103(c) (as so redesignated by section 2 of this Act) of chapter 211 of title 49, United States Code is amended--(1) in paragraph (1)(A), by striking ``21109(b)'' and inserting ``21110(b)'';(2) in paragraph (3), by striking ``21109(b)'' and inserting ``21110(b)'';(3) by striking subparagraph (C) of paragraph (4);(4) by redesignating subparagraph (D) of paragraph (4) as subparagraph (B); and(5) by striking ``new section 21103'' each place it appears and inserting ``section 21104''.
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The Bruce Highway forms part of the eastern border of the area, while the South Johnstone river makes up the north-western border. The land is pretty flat and lies 10 to 20 metres above sea level, predominately used for farming sugarcane. The North Coast railway goes south to north through the middle of the area and there is a cane tramway used for moving sugarcane to the local sugar mills.
The Bruce Highway forms part of the eastern boundary of the locality, while the South Johnstone River forms the north-western boundary. The land is relatively flat and low-lying (10-20 metres above sea level) and is predominantly used for cropping, particularly sugarcane. The North Coast railway line passes from south to north through the middle of the locality and there is a cane tramway to transport harvested sugarcane to the local sugar mills.
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He married Henry Edward Staples' only child, Frances Cecila (1819-1888), in 1846, and they had six children. Of his sons, one became a Lieutenant-General in the British Army (Edward Cecil Bethune), one a Captain in the Royal Navy (Henry Leonard Drinkwater Bethune), and one became a King's Counsel in Australia (John Brownlow Bethune). His eldest daughter, Mary Frances Drinkwater Bethune, got hitched to John George Frederick Hope-Wallace in 1867 and they had seven children together. John George Frederick was the son of the Honorable James Hope and his wife Lady Mary Frances Nugent.
In 1846, he had married Frances Cecilia (1819–1888), only child of Henry Edward Staples, and they had six children. Of his sons, Edward Cecil Bethune (1855–1930) became a Lieutenant-General in the British Army, Henry Leonard Drinkwater Bethune (1858–1939) became a Captain in the Royal Navy and Francis John Brownlow Bethune (1860–1954) became a King's Counsel in Australia. His eldest daughter, Mary Frances Drinkwater Bethune (1847–1929), in 1867 married John George Frederick Hope-Wallace (1839–1900), son of the Honourable James Hope and his wife Lady Mary Frances Nugent, and had seven children.
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Adjusted Payment Amounts for Borrowers Who Return to the REPAYE Repayment Plan. If a borrower wants to get back on the REPAYE payment plan after using a different plan (including the REPAYE Alternative Repayment plan), they've got to prove that they were making money the whole time they were on the other plan. If they find out that the borrower had been paying less on the other plan than they would have on REPAYE, then their monthly payments will jump up a little bit to make up the difference once they get back on REPAYE. They do that to make sure that the grand total will be paid off before the maximum repayment period ends in 20 to 25 years.
Adjusted Payment Amounts for Borrowers Who Return to the REPAYE Repayment Plan. If a borrower seeks to return to the REPAYE repayment plan after having left and repaid according to any other repayment plan (including the REPAYE Alternative Repayment plan), he or she must provide documentation of income for the entire period that he or she repaid according to another plan. If it is determined that the borrower paid a lesser amount under the other repayment plan (or plans) than he or she would have been required to repay according to the REPAYE repayment plan, upon returning to the REPAYE repayment plan the borrower's monthly payment amounts will be adjusted upward to ensure that the difference between the two amounts will be paid before the end of the maximum repayment period of 20 or 25 years, as applicable.
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The American Institutes for Research (AIR) conducted a study which found that 63% of TEACH Grant recipients who began their eight-year service contracts before July of 2014 had their grants converted to loans by July of 2016. Based on program data, the Department of Education also estimated that 66% of students who receive a TEACH Grant will drop out of their service requirements and convert their grants to loans.
With regard to loan conversions, an American Institutes for Research (AIR) study found that among TEACH Grant recipients who began their eight-year service period prior to July 2014, 63% had their grants converted to a Direct Unsubsidized Loan as of July 2016. Separately, in its FY2020 Congressional Budget Justification, ED estimates, based on administrative program data, that 66% of students who receive a TEACH Grant will fail to complete their service obligation and will see their grants converted to loans.
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So, in addition to the Coastal Zone Management Act's consultation duties, the state's involvement in forming a regulatory framework for offshore aquaculture may need further study. Some stakeholders support an opt-out clause that would allow states to prohibit development in federal waters next to their state's waters. Others think that opt-out provisions should only be within a certain distance of the shore (like 12 nm). In response to a prior proposed law, NOAA backed a 12 nm boundary to provide states with a buffer zone and ease the difficulties of projecting state boundaries out to 200 nm. It might be a good idea for states to work towards harmonizing aquaculture regulations because then they would be in a position to discourage or encourage these kinds of projects.
In addition to consultation requirements under the Coastal Zone Management Act, the state role in developing a regulatory framework for offshore aquaculture may deserve additional consideration. Some stakeholders support an opt-out provision allowing states to refuse development in federal waters adjacent to state waters. Others suggest that the opt-out provision should apply only within a certain distance of shore (such as 12 nm). In response to earlier proposed legislation, NOAA supported a 12 nm distance to provide states with a buffer zone and simplify the difficulties of projecting state boundaries out to 200 nm. Harmonizing aquaculture regulations with adjacent states could provide an advantage to future development, because states would be in a position to limit or promote offshore aquaculture development.
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