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Professor. Nicu Sebe of the University of Amsterdam. Dr. Huang and his colleague are developing better ways for humans and computers to communicate which the proces begin when a computer constructs a 3-D computer Model of the Human face that contains all 44 major muscles in the model that must move like Human.

Second,The Facial Expressions of some individuals often show varying degrees of expression and the new emotion-recognition software tracks facial movements in a real face or in the painted face if Mona Lisa. Each expression of a Human is being compared against a neutral face (showing no emotion). In fact us Humans perform the same impressive "calculation" everyday.

Third,Mona Lisa's Demonstration really intended to bring a smile on your face, For example: if you smile when a Web ad appears on your screen a similar ad will follow but if your frown the next ad will be different,which makes the classroom computer recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored then it could modify the lesson like an effective human instructor and with the same technology it can be used to make computer-animated faces more expressive for video games or video surgery.

Last,Our Muscles called Orbicularis oculi pars palpabraeus make crow's feet around your eyes, in a false smile the mouth is stretched sideways using the zygomatic major and a different muscle, the risorious. But, to an expert faces don't lie; the muscle clues are sometimes used to spot when a smiling politician or celebrity isn't being truthful.

In Conclusion, The Theory of Emotion is about moving your facial muscles not only expresses emotions,but it also may help produce them, And empathy may happen at some point of time when we unconsciously imitate another person's facial expressions.In the article ''Driverless Cars Are Coming,'' they talk about how there is a new invention coming. As you can tell by the title of the article, they give some pros and cons about the new invention. Some thing's the author of the article mentions is how the car works and what kind of details will be in it.

One of the first things they mentioned was how the car works. It tell's how the car would run on half the fuel we use today. Google has already made a car that is ''driverless' and it has not crashed yet. These cars would run on a track that has an electrical cable that sends radio signals to a receiver on the front end of the car.

Further on, they also explained some details they might add to the car. One of the details is that the car can handle functions up to twenty-five miles per hour, but special touch sensors make sure the driver keeps hold of the wheel. Not all of the cars are completely driverless. In fact, the only main things they can do are steer,accelerate, and brake. All are designed to notify the driver when the road requires human skills. Another detail they have is that the drivers seat vibrates when the vehicle is in dangerof backing into something. One last detail they mention is having cameras watch the driver to make sure that the drivers a remaining focused on the road.

With both of those topics being mentioned, I honestly do not think they should make the cars for public use. They say how it will be safer the driver and those around them, but in all honesty, I do not think they will be. One of the details that does not sound reasonible on the car are the cameras. The idea of someone watching you while you drive just does not sound pleasant. Yes it may make sure the driver is staying focused, but I do not think that should be on there. One of the only things about the car that sounds excellent, is the lower fuel usage. With lower fuel also mean less polution which I think is great. Dear senator, if I may speak for the people I think that the Electoral College was a great idea thanks to the founding fathers. The concept of every state in the United States of America and the people in the states have the power and decison over chosing the commander and chief. The fact that the founding father created the Constitution and the amendments is right because look at where we are today in history. The US is so strong and civilized because of the Constitution it keeps us heading in the right direction. Back to the keeping the Electoral College and its voting system.

The right to vote is a great power and acknowledgement. The people go to vote and then the state counts the the votes and which ever candidate gets the most votes recieves the electoral votes which is separated between the states. This is a grat thing because every right full human being has a chance to make a difference. If the winning candidate was only chosen for popular votes then it would be uneven and unfair then mobody would want to vote. Dont you think mr or miss senator that if the founding fathers thaught about this many years ago and they saw us today they wouldsay what a great idea and concept we came up with. The founding fathers thaught about the right of the people and thats what counts.

The Electoral College is a smart way to give the people there right to vote and chose who will make things better. THe candidate has to appeal to the people as the right guy to run the United States and can help improve the economy. The electoral college is not to make things harder it is to make things right and even for everyone. SOme states have little populations so they get less electoral votes compared to others states with huge populations they get more electoral votes cause they have more people voting which is fair for everyone. In the end the Electoral Collge is a efficient and non problematic solution to voting for a president or candidate.

The other fact is that the Electoral College provides a certain winner. The candidates have to go out and speak with the people and explain what they want to change and improve in the United states. The candidate have to prove they are worthy and capable of creating a better tomorrow. For example Barack Obama has created millions of more jobs for people and has brought up our economy. Since the crash in the economy he has done an amazing job in creating a better tomorrow for the people. How did Obama win well its the cause of the popular vote of the state and then which every person votes and then the winner get the elctoral votes of the state that is 538 divide between the states. The people did there job in listening and watching the candidates and how they can make us stronger. Mr or miss senator I would like you to think how would you feel if the you where a founding father and what would you want the us to be like in the future and how you can achive that and the peoples right.

The facts are all here the founding fathers and how they came up with this idea and the diddnt even know what wuld be the out come but in the end the right to vote and how every single human being makes a difference in chosing the president of the United States and commander and chief makes every person valuable to tomorrows out come. My honest opinion mr or miss senator is that we should keep the Electoral collge cause it is based on peoples right which is most importan and that why the constitution is based on the peoples right. The amendments where thought up as just an idea on a paper and when we make it a concept in the United States Government it makes us the people who and what we are today. To answer the question 'Does the Electoral College Work"? Well the answer is Yes, cause it is based on every persons vote which means "peoples Rights". If I may take one more minute of your time mr or miss senator to say "Human rights are the main idea and thats what we are all based on"

Thank you for your time in reading my arguement and why we should keep the Electoral College in place." Do what is for the people and by the people"

Thank you mr or miss senator. Dear Principal,

I heard about the two new cell phone policies that you are thinking about considering. I think that the first policy of letting the students use their cell phones at lunch and at other free times is a great idea. It gives students a chance during a certain time of the day to interact with other people. In the first policy it also states that the phones must be turned off during class.

Right now, we are aloud to bring our phones to school and they must stay in our locker, as far as I'm concerned. I don't see a reason why students aren't aloud to use them if we are at lunch or not doing anything at all during school. It may be a distraction to some people while doing work, so I can see why they aren't aloud in a way. I

think you should really think about considering the first policy. I

and I think many more students as well, believe that it is a great idea. Please just keep my words in your mind and think about it.

It could really change things. Thank you.

Sincerely,

STUDENT_NAMEThe new technology called the Facial Action Coding Sytem would't be valuable computers to identity human emotions.

First,Dr Huang and his colleague are experts at developing better ways for human and computers to comunicate. Dr. Huang think that it won't make a differences by the new techonlogy. Dr. Eckman has classified six basic emotions-happiness,surprise,anger,digust,fear,and sadness-and then associated each charachteristic movements of the facial muscles..Using video imagery,the new emotion recognition software these facial movements in a real face or Mona lisa. If a computer could identity then it should identy all 44 major muscles in the movement like humans.

Second,"the facial expressions for each emotion are universal,"observes Dr. Huang."A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confued or bored"Dr. Huang predicts."Then it could modify the lesson,like an effective human instructo.""Most human communication is nonverbal,including emotional communicaton,"notes Dr. Huang."So computers need to understand that,too."

Then,Your home PC can't hanlde the complex algotithms used to decode Mona Lisa's smile. But we can wrtie down some simple instruction that"encode"different emotion. In fact,these are the instructions for a face that looks happy. It;s all about those muscular action units. Humans could tell a friend is feeling simply by he look on her or hise face. Of course,most of us would have trouble actually describing each facial trait that convy happy,worried.

Finally, A classroom of student could identify more then the new technology could do. Sometimes,human might smile from the outside but human could change their feeling. A classroom of student could see their friends by thier looks.

Conclusion,The new techgology won't be valuable to read the expressions of students in a classroom because empathy may happen.Most schools assign projects for students to complete over the summer. Almost all of those projects are designed by teachers. Students who are out of school for the summer do not want to have more work that they have to do, that they dont find fun, and interesting. Students should be able to design their own summer projects because they would put more effort in making it creative, they would want to do the project, and the majority of the students will complete the assignment on time.

First of all, students should be able to design their own summer projects because they would take more time to make it as creative as they can. Whenever I am able to design any of my projects, I always try to find a way to make it creative and put as much time that I need to achieve that goal, because I enjoy the project. However if students are forced to complete the teacher designed projects, students will not put much effort into making the project creative. They would do just enough to get by and they would not care what grade they received because students want to enjoy the summer and do things that they enjoy and find interesting.

Secondly, summer projects should be student designed because they would want to do the project. When I was in middle school, every summer teachers assigned me a summer reading packet with a list of books that you have to chose to read. I never wanted to do the project because their werent any books on the list that i enjoyed, which made me not want to do it. Students will procrastinate if they are assigned a project that they dont find fun and enjoyable which means they have to rush and they would not get a grade that will be needed to pass the class.

Finally, students should be able to design their own project because they would be complete it on time. This year, my friends and I had to complete a science fair project in a span of a few weeks, we were able to chose what the topic would be, which led us to learn and have a fun time while still completing it and turning it in on time. If the students dont like the topic for the projects they will end up putting it off until the day before it is due, and they are not able to finish it when it is due. Even if students are able to design their own project, some of them still will not complete it, but there will still be more that complete it if they were able to design the project compared to the summer projects designed by teachers.

Schools that have student designed projects are more likely to have a better turn out of completion and creativity of their projects. Students do not want to spend their summer doing something that they find boring because they just got out of school and they want a break to enjoy what they like doing. There is a better chance of them doing the project over the summer if they can design their own project. Students should be able to design their own project because they will put more effort into being creative, student should want to do the project, and their would be more students completing the projects. I personally think that going to more then one person to ask for advice is a great idea because you are getting different peoples perspective for more then one side. Also, if you only listen to one person that is giving you false information then that will cause you to believe in what ever they say even tho it could be wrong. Then that will led you to give false information then when someone finds out it wrong they will never believe you again. Not only is getting more then one opinion a good thing it gives you the right thought lets say you wanna play football and soccer but you only have time for one then you go ask your friend and your friend says you should play football. After,you still dont know what to do so you ask your other friend you friend says soccer so then you think.

After, a couple of days you ask you friend that ask why did you say I should play football he says football is more manly and you need to be really good and have a lot of skill and need to be strong for football. Rather then soccer where you just kick a ball into a goal and over celebrate. Football use a bunch tackling and running,catching,throwing. You also have trow a perfect spiral or the team will intercept it or it will get swatted. On top of all that a wide receiver have to run a really complex route for the defender to get off of him and for him to catch it. afterwards, the quarter back has to avoid getting tackled and releases the ball before getting tackled from 3-4 linemen. Also,football is better to watch there are field goals,touchdowns,even two point plays which makes the game even more fun to watch. Football also has a super bowl after every season to determine who is to best in the league during the super bowl game theres is also a half time show where celebrities preform to sing and dance. So that is why I think you should play football and why I think football is better

After,you hear your friend talk you go to your other friend and say the same thing why did you say I should play soccer?.He says because soccer is about teamwork and strategy like passing the pass to your teammate a certain way or direction so the defender doesnt get it ,or you shoot it with more curve then power so the goalkeeper doesnt save it. Soccer is more complex then you think like goalkeepers. Goalkeepers are one of the hardest position to play if not the hardest its so skill based you need to know wen to dive or when to jump,or know if its going out ,or curving in. Also, you need to work with you team or your not going to do so good. Soccer use a lot of running,stamina ,and quick thinking. Like for example if there is a defender on you and you have the ball you need to figure out if our going to shoot, pass, or straight up just out run him. Also,defending is extremely hard to play and extremely important because if you dont have defense ,or not good at defending they will simple just out run you ,and score .Soccer also has a thing called Champions league where all the teams compete to see whos the best in the world. Do you get it now how soccer is based of skill and strategy ,and not just kicking a ball in to a goal.

After,all it not about what sport is better or what is more watched or liked better its about playing what you want to play ,and how you want to play. you see this is why I think getting more then one opinion from two different people is important it can really help out the situation if you ask the right people they will lead you to the right decision this is also really important if your not sure what to do or just want to learn more about your decision before making it.   A Cowboy Who Rode he Waves Essay

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Luke had turned 18 before he arrived in Greece, he said" I could be drafted for military services" ( paragraph 4). It took Luke to get across the Atlantic Ocean eastern coast of the United States 2 weeks, and 1 month to get to China. Luke had made a least 9 trips, more than any Seagoing cowboy. By the time it was 1947 Luke had helped people he said " Besides helping people, I had the side benefit of seeing Europe and China" ( paragraph 5). Luke had visited Venice,Italy he rode a gondola because the streets were water. He also " took a tour in a excavated castle in Crete, and the Panama Canalon his way to China" (paragraph 5).

Reasons A few reasons why you should to join the program that Luke is in because 1: he is a night watchman. That seems exicting because he gets to watch over the animal.2: he got to to visit a whole lot of places like Venice, Europe, China, and the Panama Canal. 3: he was on a boat so he got to visit the places like Europe and China. The last reason is to keep himself busy is caring for the animals during th crossing.

Body What Luke likes about being Seagoing Cowboys is he metioned that this would be an opportunity of a lifetime. When he first got on the boat he was exicted to visit the coolest places. The First one he visited was Greece that was the place they headed first. Then it was Europe that was where the boat was headed toward. Venice it is last he said " So was taking a godola ride in Venice, Italy, acity with streets of water.

Conclusion They are so manythings that Luke learned that ws really acurate of being a night watchman. Like helping people benefit of seeing Europe and China. Going through new expirence places like Europe, China, Veince,Italy. I am sure he probably visited more but, who knows. Luke learned that they'res a lot to handle of being a military watchman. The opportunity of a lifetime if he didn't take who knows of what could've happened to his life after he took the opportunity I am also sure he said hello to my New Life.Dear Principal,

I think that it is a great idea for allowing students to participate in sports, only if they have a B average. The students will try harder in their classes and most will actually pay attention to the teachers. They would not be focusing only on the sports their play and they would take their time to study. This could help the students to learn a lot more.

The students who play sports would listen to their teachers a lot more if you use this policy. In a poll it showed that 9 out of 10 students who plays sports do not focus on their academics only on the sports they play. If you let student who have a at least a B average to play sports then the student will surely pay attention to their academics. They will feel the need of getting a better grade.

The student will study on tests and quizzes to get a better grade. They would not leave it till the last minute. The students will take the time to learn the stuff the teacher teaches. In a research scientists found that students often do not have good grades because they focus too much on sports.Do you believe distance learning is beneficial to students? Well, I believe distance learning is beneficial to students. Many people believe that distance learning is not a benefit to students because they think that students will learn better when being taught in school. I think distance learning is a benefit for students because it stops physical bully, Students will make better grades, Also students are less likely to drop out of school.

Firstly, I believe that distance learning is beneficial to students because it stops physical bullying. Bullying is a serious issue in schools. Also bullying causes other serious issues, For example, Fights and Suicides. Another example is my friend, He was once being bullied. He had start getting bullied the first week of the school year. The bully would step on my friends shoes and hit him in the back of the head. By the middle of the school year my friend had committed suicide. Events similar to this can be avoided with distance learning.

Secondly, Distance learning is beneficial to students because they will make better grades. With distance learning, students will be learning at home. With students learning at home they will be more comfortable and not have people around distracting them. If students are comfortable and have no distractions then they will focus and make better grades. studies show that someone who is relaxed can focus and learn better than someone who is stressed and nervous. With students making good grades they will have the chance to go to a good collage. And students who graduate from good collages usually get high paying jobs. That is how distance learning is a benefit for the students.

Lastly, Distance learning is beneficial to students because it will make them less likely to drop out of school. With distance learning students will have more freedom and less stress. Students will not have to worry about eating bad tasting food because they can eat at home. Students will not have to worry about being late to class. Which will make a student not mind school. With that being said, Students will not drop out of school. Which is a good thing for the students. Therefore distance learning is a benefit to the students.

So therefore, I believe that distance learning is a benefit to students. The reasons being is that it stops physical bullying, Students make better grades, And students are less likely to drop out of school.The curiousity about Mars has been going on for centuries.

People say that there is or once was life on Mars, and now they are saying that there is a face on Mars.

Humans all around the world have questioned whether the "Face" was created by aliens or just a natural landform.

Well calm down earthlings, it's just a natural landform.

In 1976, Viking 1 took photos of Mars and found a huge rock formation that remebled a human head with shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose, and mouth.

This was soon to be known as the "Face on Mars".